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Great story!!!!!!!!! good plot, good lemons, cool pairing. want more now please '~'

OHOHOH!! Please keep goinng! I wanna see what punishment Mokuba will have in store for Bakura!!

Okay, this is absolutely my favorite story!! O_O I want more!! You're such a cool author and you're actually inspiring me to finish my "A Small Dragon's Fun" fanfic. It also has the main odd pairing Mokuba x Bakura...except Mokuba is only 15. ^^; Heh. Oh pretty please write more!

ohhh yea!!!...u continued the story!!!!!! i can't wait!!!!

Ah, you've turned it into multi-chapters! I was wondering about the package. Now what about the envelope? SHould I feel sorry for Bakura? To a point, yes, but seeing what Mokuba is doing to him makes it hilarious!

I lOVE YOU!! People rarely doing spanking in fics which is a shame because if done right it can be VERY sexy! So i must congratulate you on this! I love spanking but unfortunatly i rarely get to see it. T_T So thank you! You have a very interesting writing style, i like it, although you need to spellcheck more. One more note. That dare between Mokuba and Bakura in the past, i would've love to have seen more of that, it would've been nice to see Bakura spank Mokuba and see how he would react. Any chance of you doing a prequel perhaps? Bakura got what he deserved however and it was rather funny in some places! ^_^ I know from experience how hard that pairing can be, i did myself as part of a challenge in a group that i belong to. The reason i didn't post it here is because i'ost ost my password and am unable to get into my account right now, hence the reason (Or 1 of them anyway) why i haven't been posting lately. So, good job, even if Bakura was slightly ooc, as in hating the dark etc...it was also amusing! ^^ I really hope that you do more of this kind of thing, i have plently ideas for such things if you ever need inspiriation, e-mail me...please, i'd love to talk and throw around ideas. Later! ^__^ Keep up the good work!

It's true what they say: What goes around, comes around. ::snickers:: I have never seen this pairing before and I have to admit, it was goooooooood! My thanks to Shadow of Light for sending me the link to your fic. Can't wait to see more of your work!

Two words describe this story: HOLY. SHIT. And I mean that in a good way! First off, MokubaxBakura pairing? Okay I had my doubts but reading this I was floored! That whole dare about T.R. it took me a moment but Tomb Raidier? How could he not put that as his name? *giggles* Seriously, Kura a slave and Mokie the master? Ooh what could be hotter?? *day dreams then shakes head* Um scratch that. It's sad to see this story end but I am highly reccommending this to all my friends!! You have a superb creativity and writing style!! I bow to you *does a deep bow*