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schedule
September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi! you have a good concept but having all the dialogue be "Seto: Set: Seto Thinking:" is a little disorienting.
schedule
September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but can I ask you to re-write this? It really is very confusing to read in this layout