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for Darkness consumes the light

by Sansi

person DracOnyx
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE DANG IT!

hehe, listen to me . . . I'm such a hypocrite : ) Anyway, still a great read. Watch your paragraphing though . . . at times it seems a bit cluttered. Not that I mind too much, it's still readable, which is better than some of the stuff I've seen.

Can't wait to see more : )

DracOnyx
person Nikkayla-san
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
COOL! I like already ^_^ Yami X Yugi my fave Yu-GI-Oh! pag ^^g ^^ Also Marik X Malik, but yeah... COOL. Me wants to see more, more more! It rocked! Keep up the good work ^_^
person Chibi
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tis good. And, yeah, even if the ending of Yu-Gi-Oh! was fitting, I never liked it... so more please!
person Ali
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was awsome continue!!!
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh please continue this is starting to catch my intrests and really i could use something new to read hehe it gets boring after a while reading the same thing over and over again whilw waiting for the impending arival he ohe one and only Hurricane Ivan dam i dont know how much more FL can take first Bonnie then Charley and then frances and NOW IVAN *looks into the sky*COME ON MOTHER NATURE GIVE US A BREAK WE CANT TAKE MUCH MORE huh well keep up the great work TTFN TA TA FOR NOW provided we dont get anyMORE HURRICANES cuz we really dont need anymore cya
person DracOnyx
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bonk* Yes we want you to continue! How could you not . . . you have us all terribly intrigued, dang it! MORE!