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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story but, would have liked to have known more of what happened after the fact. Other that it was a really grate story...
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have loved this story, both on ff.net and here. I was wondering if you were going post another chapter anytime soon. I want to thank you for the enjoy time I have had reading this story (multiple times).
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...What the HELL was THAT? Yami, you IDIOT! WHY?! You had a damn chance for you and your aibou to be truly happy and you threw it away? AGAIN? FOR THE SECOND FRICKIN' TIME?!
...Sorry. Emotional. Very. Mad, actually.
Why -did- you kill Yami, anyway? That doesn't exactly make sense.
...Kill yourself to free your lover from pain?
Sorry, but that logic is seriously screwed up.
Why did Yami think killing himself would HELP Yugi? He could have STAYED, dammit.
Like he should have in the first place!
*Sigh * nevertheless, you win an award for originality. *Claps * Now post, or I'll have to hunt you down.
...Sorry. Emotional. Very. Mad, actually.
Why -did- you kill Yami, anyway? That doesn't exactly make sense.
...Kill yourself to free your lover from pain?
Sorry, but that logic is seriously screwed up.
Why did Yami think killing himself would HELP Yugi? He could have STAYED, dammit.
Like he should have in the first place!
*Sigh * nevertheless, you win an award for originality. *Claps * Now post, or I'll have to hunt you down.
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BY THE GODS! that is so similar with the story I had in mind once, awesome work, I have read 2 of you fics so far and i am most impressed! Please, do not keep us in suspense for much longer! *hugs*, my best wishes and compliments to you.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that I'm finally understanding how to work this site. Please don't leave us hanging like this. If you do, I'll sicc my bipolar 8 year old son on you. You won't have to worry if his good side is showing, the most he can do is hug you to death. It's his demon side you have to worry about. So please continue. I'm lovin your stories. P.S. Wow, Yami really is acting like a lot of guys I know. Totally dense!
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That's about all I can say..but in a good way..and a shocked way.. can't wait til the next chapter..I added you to my Story Alert thing on FF.net so I'll know.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was just dramatic but i get the whole story (actually the name i'm using is my yami's) i'm the hikari in my own mind. ehe. don't spread the word that i'm schizo almost didn't get out of the nuthouse even if i volunteered to go there in the 1st place. enough about my nag and rave.
i like this fic! 100% like it. Ü update soon! Ü
i like this fic! 100% like it. Ü update soon! Ü
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let me just start off by saying that I love your story. I really was upset when I saw the last episode of Yu-Gi-Oh. I don’t think they should have ended it like that. So, that is why I love your story so much. I do have a question though. Anubis wasn’t that the name of the evil god in the Yu-Gi-Oh movie? I really did recall seeing or hearing that name, I swear.
I don’t know, maybe you just forgot or something. Hmm anyways, for someone who doesn’t have English as their first language you speak it very well. I congratulate you on that. I love the title that was what originally brought me to read your story. “Darkness consumes the Light” Oh I just love it.
How ever I caught something, nothing big. I don’t even know how I found it myself. But, in chapter five when Yami is talking to Solomon, Yami never said anything about Ryou. He said
“I tried to give him a friend, another soul mate, if you want to call it that. But we failed”
Then after, Solomon talks saying that “You only have one! You can’t just take Ryou or me, for that matter, to replace you.” But, Solomon never knew Yami had enlisted Ryou’s help.
But, far be it from me to understand how the hell I found it. I usually either not see the mistakes or just read over them. I don’t know, I am not a great writer either. I make a lot of mistakes. So, this isn’t a bad review. Far from it actually, because I love this story.
Also, your “Emotional Basket” chapter is posted three times. There are three chapters the same. I think you might want to fix it.
Now please excuse my ranting towards you. In these next sentences I don’t mean anything that I say to you…
How the fucking hell could you make Yami kill himself. Are you stupid or something? God could Yami fucking tell that Yugi was fine now with Yami back. Like what the fucking hell you stupid moron why the fuck did you do that. I hate you!!!
Again I didn’t mean any of that. I am just ranting; none of the remorse is directed towards you. Just the fact that Yami killed himself when clearly he knew Yugi was happy.
So, I hope you update soon. I can’t wait till I can read the next chapter.
Bi
I don’t know, maybe you just forgot or something. Hmm anyways, for someone who doesn’t have English as their first language you speak it very well. I congratulate you on that. I love the title that was what originally brought me to read your story. “Darkness consumes the Light” Oh I just love it.
How ever I caught something, nothing big. I don’t even know how I found it myself. But, in chapter five when Yami is talking to Solomon, Yami never said anything about Ryou. He said
“I tried to give him a friend, another soul mate, if you want to call it that. But we failed”
Then after, Solomon talks saying that “You only have one! You can’t just take Ryou or me, for that matter, to replace you.” But, Solomon never knew Yami had enlisted Ryou’s help.
But, far be it from me to understand how the hell I found it. I usually either not see the mistakes or just read over them. I don’t know, I am not a great writer either. I make a lot of mistakes. So, this isn’t a bad review. Far from it actually, because I love this story.
Also, your “Emotional Basket” chapter is posted three times. There are three chapters the same. I think you might want to fix it.
Now please excuse my ranting towards you. In these next sentences I don’t mean anything that I say to you…
How the fucking hell could you make Yami kill himself. Are you stupid or something? God could Yami fucking tell that Yugi was fine now with Yami back. Like what the fucking hell you stupid moron why the fuck did you do that. I hate you!!!
Again I didn’t mean any of that. I am just ranting; none of the remorse is directed towards you. Just the fact that Yami killed himself when clearly he knew Yugi was happy.
So, I hope you update soon. I can’t wait till I can read the next chapter.
Bi
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one who knew that was gonna happen? Gods Yami melodramtic huh, well anyways look forward to an update