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Konichiiwa!

NYUUU!!!!! ATEN DUN DO IT!!! *Searches for ropew to tie Aten down so he doesn't hurt or kill himself* DUNDO IT!!!!
Kyasarin: Cat, if Aten really WAS gunna kill himself, do you think bakurasgirl would talk about how in the next fic, she'd put in an Aten/Robbie lemon?
Caterfree: Oh yeah...
Kya: 7_7
Cat: Anywise, darn Serenity! She's being so goddamn rude! *Digs out serenity plushie and burns it* DAMN YOU SERENITY!!!! *Kicks burnt plushie into nearest river* Anyways, I gotta go now. Please update again soon!

Ja Ne! ^_~

you should update on friday cause i'll be away from my computer on saturday, lol, the story is going along great. so both boys are in love and are just to scared to admit it. That is just so sweet it makes my teeth hurt. Can't wait to see you update.

*does a little happy dance* Yaaay 'Togi in an apron!

Ohh, fantastic job with Ryou and Aten! The dream was good, especially the part where Aten kissed Robbie's foot. I almost teared up! I really liked how you had Otogi handle both situations too. *laughs* If anyone has to be stuck in that predicament, it should be him. Robbie's internal dialog on who to ask was funny.

Damn, those guys showed. They just creep me out!

Great work as usual and yaaaaay, 'Togi in an apron!

Kat

wow o rea really helped them out. hee he may act like a girl most of the time but he's a man through and through. and charlie and vinne? *growls angrily* can't wait for their torture. anyway love your story as always ^^

Gods, someone drop kick Serenity, please! She's as bad as Miranda's sister. Okay, minus the smoking.

Awwww Poor Robbie and Aten! They're just so cute together too!

“Do you see your son?”
“Yes.”
“Good boy. Do you see how he’s squirming?”
“Yes.”
“Do you know WHY he is squirming? Look down.”
Marik’s eyes widened and his jaw dropped. “Oh….shit!”
*cracks up* I was thinking that Bakura was going to have to draw him a picture! I caI can't wait to see how the "talk" goes! *laughs harder* Bakura dealing with Aria getting older is priceless! I can't wait to see how fast he freaks when she does start her period. _I_ may have a bowl of popcorn ready for that!

Okay, that last part with Charlie was just plain freaky. You've managed to fully capture the man's insanity.... Scary as hell.

Yaaaaay, Uncle Togi in an apron! *laughs* Love it!!
Kat

Two or four plots thicken? I think Serenity needs to get a life. I never liked her to begin with either. I think Haydeuncluncle needs to be taught a lesson by Kaiba. I think Aria is going to remain a virgin forever! Poor girl! You better have Aten and Robbie at least know what their feelings are for each other. Keep on writing!

first I jsut... well i sjut wanna strangle serenity with a telephone cord or jsut hit her until i get tired. some sister *sighs* also, man i REALLY don't like vinne and charlie. sorry this is short but i have no diea what else to say. love your saga!!

Serenity is against all this?!? I would have thought that she would be supportive. God, what's with everyone and not suppoting this. Poor Aten and Robbie...they'll have to tell eachother about this sooner or later won't they? *sigh* Life gets so much more complicated when the years go by...

I like Dr. Chapman I mean he's good in his profession and he actually cares about his patients! I just hope Otogi can help Aten. Weddings are fun (my cousin is getting married in October even though her mom is totally against it). Serenity is back! Coolness! But is it good or bad news? Happy to see this series still in the works!

I completely forgot about Serenity I'm glad she's coming into the story. I'm also glad that Aten has a easier time speaking then he use to. For some reason I thought he would be turning 15 in this story. but 12 is good. I feel bad that he has such trouble with his fantasys. That is so sad and it just makes me hate the grandfather more and more. *growl* other then that great story. can't wait for sunday. Wish me luck i have a game i have to orm orm at.