rate_review Reviews

I like your story, but I had one problem with it. If I were somewhere being held captive and my jailers were stupid enough to leave a revolver in a drawer, I would use it on them! I know it would end the story sooner, but you would have the three of them struggling to get home which could prolong the story.

NICE!!! I love how they gathered all there followers, specially when It was Mariks Turn to gather them lol. anyways I can wait till the next story *sometimes when it gets really really good and the susspence is practically killing me, the updates are waaaaay to long lol but i know for that much writing in that amount of time is actually quite fast lol one problem though what was your pen nam ff. ff.net? that way i can read the stories that where writen on there. anyways gatta go read more of the previous stories *Ive read 4 so far including this one those other three took me 2weeks just to finish but i had school on some days too which sucks cause I just wanna read your stories theo goo good.* well anyways ja mata!

Lol! Black bedsheets....that's so great. Well it serves him right to have a routine like that. Okay, I officially love Asher! *hugs the adoreable pyromaniac* Could I have a a plushie of him please? *puppy dog eyes* Oh, and to the person who bitched about your stories, don't listen to him/her. The continuations are amazing and I never want the series to end. Never stop writing! ^.^

*sighs deeply and rubs face* Man I wouldn't be surprised if I got more white hairs after reading this. this story is great as always and the suspense is murder on us! poor umi and mako and trevor's kids. and serenity *stabs serenity doll repeatedly* a child is missing and all she cares about is breaking up the wedding? please do something awuful to her in the end? and aten gets teh spotlight? yes!! so that's who teh third guy was!! huh, well that was a surprsie to me ^^ love your story and that person who didn't leave an e-mail... you know jsut forget them. so your story is long who cares? you are a fabulous writer and if u suddenly end it here that will leave like hundreds! (okay maybe not that much) very disappointed reeaders. and not leaving a e-mail addy for you to contact? can we say cowardly loser? *sighs* okay getting off track here. again i love your fic and oh! still my favorite part, bakura playing the role of over-protective father. ^^ now i can't help but imagine what aria's and umi's kids will look like!! waiting for the next update :)

Io and Kit: *glares* we read that review that, that guy left. *glares more*

Io: I CAN KILL HIM FOR YOU!!!!!

Kit: *rolls eyes* I sware Io....are you SURE you're not a seme? Any way. ^-^ I do love this fic. And I don't care what any one else says. You just keep writing. I love Aten so much! He's just TOO kawaii~~!!hehehe. Any way~ gatta go now. I'll be looking for the update in a couple days. ^-^ ja ne.

*snort* that "reviewer" is just a putz. Writing for stars? You could never be a star whore. *blinks* Well.... you know what I mean, even if it that sentence does sound weird.

Oooo thank you for the new blanket! Weather actually turned cold last night. *grins*

Her father’s voice called from downstairs. “DO I HEAR SPAWNING UP THERE?!”
*laughs through tears* Honestly Bakura, you need to listen to Malik and Marik if you really wanna know what spawning sounds like. Seriously, overly-protective-papa Bakura is just cute!

*snarls* It figures, that silly bitch Serenity hears about a missing child and thinks about herself. *yells* Someone slap that stupid cow!

I gotta go compose myself after that scene with Hayden being chained up... You've done such a good job with writing this that I'm just heartbroken. Thanks for the laugh with Alex's comment about Seto waiting to pound Joey through every floor of the building.

Thursday, huh? Okay, reallod eod excuse to get to work extra early so that I can read the update before I open the shop (instead of waiting until I get home).

*hugs*
Kat

Konichiiwa!

GAH!!!!! I hate cliffies! this is as bad as 'Watch Over me' and 'Anything for You'! MYAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cliffies are evil! *Hisses* Erm, anyways, I hate the time I have to wait! I'm gunna die by Monday! *Falls over* Myaaa..... Darnit! Update quicker!!!!! *Pummels plushies to vent frustration*

Ja Ne! ^_~

Uke Io: *SCREAMS* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!! UPDATE! UPDATE!

Uke Kit: *grabs Io by the hair pulling him back* You are NOT killing ANY ONE! I would like to see this fic updated. Don't you know how to read!? *roll eyes* baka Io. Any way! I love this fic so far! ^-^ I keep loosing track how many fics to this series you have, because they all blend toger. er. ^-^ any way! keep updating. And next time I'll tie Io up so he dosn't scream any more.

oh that was good, and bad cause i feel bad for those kids. Well can't wait for you to update. I don't get my car this weekend like i thought i gotta wait a bit. so your whats holding me together while i pace waiting for the vehicle. LOL

I have to say I'm not very please how this story is turning out but looking at your star rating I would have to say many people are feeling the same as I do. Please stop with the sequels and mon. In. I like you as a writer but the sequels are nerve racking now.