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by Aten

person PainAddiction
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loki- Hayden's got autism right? I haven't done much study into it, but the signs sound like it.
Once knew a person that had it...use to throw huge tantrums. I hope Seto and joey can handle it alright.
person PainAddiction
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Bakura crossed his arms sternly. “This is not playing, Aria! You don’t go around putting make-up on your family members! What am I going to do with---?”
Bakura disappeared.
Aria bit her lip, laughing.
Bakura reappeared. “I AM YOUR FATHER, MISSY! DON’T YOU DARE SEND ME TO THE SHADOW REALM---.”
Bakura disappeared.
Aria fell back on her bed, laughing, as she clutched onto her Change of Heart plushie.
Bakura reappeared. “ARIA KANIKA! STOP THIS--!”
Bakura disappeared then reappeared. “ARIA-!”
Her father disappeared again then reappeared. “STOP!”"



Loki- LOL!!! I pity the guy who dumps Aria.
person Kat
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bakura smiled. “I love you to pieces. You know that, right?”
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW

“This was made in a volcano, Anzu. This isn’t a living, breathing organism!”
”Orgasm?????”
*shudders then falls over laughing* Poor Bakura... He's so gonna remember this!!! Let's hope it doesn't have the same effect as Salt Peter!!!

“Did I just tell her where to find the kids???!! I’m in deep shit.”
*nods* Yes, yes he is.

“That romantic moment cosve hve hundred dollars.”
Ryou led. ed. “That’s all? I was sure that it would be at least twice than that.”
*laughs hysterically*

“Oh my god…he fell asleep as I was rubbing his hair!”
*is overwhelmed by the cuteness*

"The urge to squish them into next week is getting too much"
*nods* yes!! For me too!!!

I can see Gabby selling Mary Kay or Avon... *G*

Aria narrowed her eyes and grinned. “I know something we could do. Follow me.”
Uh oh... this doesn't sound good...

Beside Aten, the Millennium Rod vibrated with his laughter.
Oooo what what what?!?!?!

“Umm…I’d love to, ‘Kura, but umm…how shall I put this….I’d hate to smear your lipstick.”
*blinks* *cackles*

Bakura ran upstairs and looked in the bathroom mirror. He had lipstick on him, eye shadow, blush, and eyeliner. Mascara was on his eyelashes.
*shrieks and falls over laughing*

*howls* Revolving Shadow Realm Door!!!

"But I know your daddy doesn’t appreciate waking up and looking like a drag queen.”
*laughs* He'd only appreciate it if it was someone else waking up looking like a drag queen. *snickers*

With a quick motion, he punched Serenity in the jaw.
*whistles, cheers, throws confetti* Way to go Mokie!!!! WOOHOOO One-shot Kaiba! *rings bell* Da Winner!!! *laughs*
Okay, okay... yesss, poor Jaimen. He's just such a sweet thing. Still... Go Mokie!

“That is a lie and you know it, Wheeler!”
Uh oh... he only calls Joey by his last name when he's had it. This is not good....

Whoa.... they're going to duel... This ought to be... interesting.

“Mustard? What’s mustard doing on the Red Eyes?”
*bursts out laughing*

“This isn’t blood. It’s….ketchup! What the hell did this happen?”
*falls over laughing*

The two dragons growled low in their throats as the affectionately cleaned each other up.
*shrieks* Ooooo kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinky! *wipes tears from eyes*

Joey allowed Seto to bring him into his arms and lay him on the floor…..
*blinks* where's the lemon? *smirks*

“Ha! That’s my little girl! Growls just like her daddy!”
*laughs*

“What do you say we raid moneybags’ fridge and go take a ride on the wave’ again?”
“Yami, do you really want to make love on Seto’s waterbed again? It’s not such a good idea. What if he finds out?”
*falls over laughing* Seto's always happy to oblige. Sog asg as he never finds out!

I'm so glad I got the Monster back so I could read this!!
Kat
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dragons covered in condiments......BWAHAHAHA! That was very cute! Bakura is make up sounds very sexy....go figure I'd think that though....me and my strange tastes. LOL
I loved the part where Aria was sending Bakura to the Shadow Realm too...can I borrow her for the day? She's totally the shit! *squishes Aria*
person PainAddiction
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loki- GAHH! I've been reading your stuff for a long time, just never revewied-
Suku- Cauhe'she's lazy.
Loki- *whacks Suku with stick* Never mind her *evil stare* she just lives here.
Suku- I'm a stalker ^^
Loki- =_=;; Back to the reveiw. You imagery and sensory details are so in depth, and you tie in plot so artistically with slash its incredible. I've been addicted to your stuff for awhile ^^

...and since I read yours you should read mine....but nones up yet. Just to be fair.

Suku- Fasci Lok Loki- =_=....your an idiot.
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're really gonna use my idea? Yay! ^.^ I can't wait to see how you will get it to work. *sighs* Just thinking about what those three little chibis went through and are going through now makes me so sad whenever I think about it. I hope thet bet better soon. Let's just hope that for how long they are like this it doesn't have a toll on everyone else.
person Kat
schedule November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squishes Jaimen*

The corof hof his lips curled into a weak smile. “Rob-----*pant*----bie.”
Okay, all together now: AWWWWWWW that's so cute!!!

“I was sure he wouldn’t wake up. I was going to tell the family to start making final arrangements today. I didn’t think Aten would mak.”
.”
*sniffles* Nope, can't happen. I don't want it to happen....

Marik held up his Rod. “We do not have to stop!”
The officers stopped their pursuit in a trance.
Wow, Marik's Rod sure is handy... *blinks*

“I-I-I’ll wait…for the next one.”
Marik narrowed his eyes. “Good move.”
*laughs* that poor doctor's gonna need clean shorts.

Marik nodded. “I tried waking her up yesterday before her alarm and SHE sent ME to the Shadow Realm! ME! Luckily I had my Rod so I appeared back in her room.”
*laughs hysterically* Seee, I said his Rod is handy!

Ryou raised an eyebrow. “’Magical?’ When I discovered it, it didn’t look like magic.”
Marik sighed. “It was a magic mess.”
Oh yeah *says sarcastically* It's magic all right. *laughs*

"Yet, once a month I still crave it.”
*laughs* Ryou needs beef jerky and Marik has to have chocolate! Sign them both up for 'Togi's chick flicks! *ducks*

*snorts* Father Vidello... boooo *hiss*

Seto stood outside with his eyes closed and rubbed his temples, mentally trying to drown out the sound of screams.
Poor Seto...

*snickers* Watching financial shows on tv is not quality time! *smirks* hhhhhhhhh so that's why Hayden regressed to that stage.... Poor thing. It's so sad.

“I haven’t had a living nerve in five thousand years, Chapman. You know that!”
Chapman smirked. “Has it been that long? Time flies, huh?”
*laughs* Gods, those two...

I like the way Dr. Chapman deals with Robbie. That's just fantastic!

“Aten doesn’t have them. che che-cked.”
*snorks*
“I kee-p c-cooties away from At-Aten.”
*snickers*
“You keep up that splendid job you are doing, Robbie. Because we all know that ‘Cootie-Patrol’ is a dangerous job.”
*laughs hysterically*

“I’m not leaving you, Aten. Daddy’s going to stay right here beside you…..always.”
awwwwww *sniffles and blows nose* That's so damned sweet.

Bakura crossed his legs in an automatic reflex.
*laughs*

Bakura stood up. “I better go check on Ryou and M. I’. I’m going to call the hospital and see how Chibi Marik is doing.”
Bakura left the room.
Malik scooped Aria’s half-cooked eggs onto a plate and heard the buzzer on the dryer go off. “Laundry’s done!”
*cackles* Yup, Aria's in the room. Everyone run!!

No mustard.
No ketchup.
Aria returned to hert. “t. “I’m in deep shit.”
*falls over howling* I love it!!

Kat
person Caterfree10
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

Aww, poor Aten can't speak English temperarily. =( Poor little guy... Anyways, Hoo boy. Aria's gunna get in trouble when Malik finds out what she did to the Ketchup and Mustard (Not that imind about the mustard, but that's beside the point MUSTARD EVIL!!! *hisses* mustard gross! *Ahem*) And oh yeah! Anzu bashing in next chappie! ^_______^ can't wait! ^_^ Until then, I have to go now. Update quicker!

Ja Ne! ^_~
person Caterfree10
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

YAY!!!! Aten ish awake! YAY!!!! *Throws confetti everywhere* ^_____^
Kyasrin: Finally! A chapter in hich Cat is happy after! HOORAY!!! NO MORE RUNNING AROUND!!!!! ^_____^
Caterfree: and yeah! Go Aria! Teach Yami who the hell is boss! My three words for Yami....k ofk off bitch" *Ring* Ooh! Idea! How 'bout the next time Someone who's against Yami comes into contact with him, they say that phrase? It would be SOO funny I can garentee! =D Anywise,gotta go now. I think I'm gunna puke again soon (Having all six people in the same house who are all sick with the same disease is NOT funcan can assure you...) *Runs for restroom*

Ja Ne! ^_~
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Aten's awake!!!! The poor little guy went through so much that I didn't expect to have him wake up for a few more chappies. O.O You actually used my PMSing Aria against Atem idea? I was so happy when I read that. You made me feel special. *hands Aten a Winged Dragon of Ra plushie* Get better sweetie. Oh, and THANK YOU fir having Seto catch Joey with his drinking. I was going nuts reading about him drinking and not having Seto catch him. I kept yelling at my screen to have Seto catch him. Now I am calm. Oh, new idea. Serenity should face the wrath of Yami Aten. That would be a fun thing to see...since we now know that his Yami is crazy evil. *patiently waits for your next update*