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for Return To Hades

by Aten

person Caterfree10
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

EEp! not the happiness as in the first chapter when Joey and Seto made love! 'Twas interrputed by Hayden and now... WAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! He hed to go to the looney bin! *Cries*
Kyasarin: ALright Cat, you've gone through this before in a way. Only it was Sanzogoku39 when she tried to kill herself.
CAterfree: *Bitch slaps Kyasarin* DUN BRING THAT UP!!!! I'd rather forget that now that Sanzo-san is back, thank you...
Kyasairn: X_x Okies,I won't bring it up anymore... *Quielty sneaks off*
Caterfree: Meh! I dun wanna wait until domingo! (Sanday) DARNIT!!!! *Pouts* OH well, I gotta go now. Can't wait for the sequal! ^_^

Ja Ne! ^_~

Oh and one more thing... Gueswhat?Guesswhat?Guesswhat?
You: What?
Cat: *Holds up mini Malik firguine in your face* MALIK SEZ HI!!!!! =D
Everyone else: --;

(Dun ask, I've been in a weird mood at school lately...)
person Kat
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, hell of an ending! Damn... interrupted lemon though! *g* Well, I'm glad Hayden's out of it. For the time being. I was really beginning to dislike the kid. *shrugs* There ya have it. Okay, Sunday. Pity about the marriage though. Dang... hell of an ending.

Kat
person Caterfree10
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

Yeah! Go Aten! Tell'em all that you don't hide your faith! ^_^ I knowI don'thide mine!
Kyasarin: Cat, technically you do since: one, you haven't the slightest idea what you really believe in for sure anymore and two, you haven't worn a cross for Ra knows how long.
Caterfree: Details, details. Anyways... Oh gods... Jeanie had the babies at Christmas... O.O What a time to have 'em though! Christmas babies! ^_^ Just like Malik-kun (Dec. 23) and my RL friend, Casey (Dec. 21)! And wow, going out of this fanfic like you came in... with a SetoXJoey lemon! ^____________^ Happy mind! ^_~
Kyasarin: And I shall be hiding in my soul room come tomorrow...
Caterfree: Whatever you say, Kya! I get to have more fun then!
Kyasarin: *Groans* Just don't make it loud... like last night in your dreams... *Shudders*
Caterfree: =D Anyways, gotta go! ¡Hasta mañana!

Ja Ne! ^_~
Note to self: screw the symbols from now on. much too difficult and takes too long... Now I know why I don't include the accent mark in miercoles...
person Caterfree10
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

ooh! Time for a guessing game on Yugi's new boyfriend! *Grabs Shonen Jump YGO graphic novels* Oh! It is Hanasaki? I think they'd make a great couple! ^_^ or maybe it's...um...Rishid? Naw, I really don't seem them as a good pair... Shaid perhaps? Nah, same comment as Rishid... DARNIT!!! I can't think of nuthin'! *Bang head on desk* I *Bang* CAN'T *Bang* THINK!!!!!!!!! *BANG!* Owwie... my head hurts... *Falls over*
Kyasarin: *Sigh* Methinks my hikari needs to see a shrink... *Shakes* Anyways, you kow what Cat always says. She's gunna die before Wednesday.
Caterfree: *groggily* Thats...miercoles...
Kya: Whatever. And To please uypdate quicker. See ya!

Ja Ne! ~_^
person Caterfree10
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiwa!

OH... my...God... Aria... having babies.... and Bakura... having to help.... sweet Isis, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN THAT HEAD OF YOURS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Kyasarin: *Stupidly imagined such an event* MY BRAIN!!!! MY BRAIN!!!!! *Falls over* and I though Cat's threesome fantasies were bad!!! And no, I was not involved. She has fun with two men in her fantasies... AKA Gippal from FFX-2 and Malik in the same bed as her. >< Gods... bad memories of stumbling into her soulroom while that dream was going on... *Shudders*
Caterfree: What? You didn't like that dream? Didn't wanna make it a foursome? Teeheeheeheehee...
Kyasarin: HELL NO!!!!! *Hides*
Caterfree: Baahahahaha!!!!! *Ahem* anyways, gods, I think this is gunna be your shortest story from what you're saying! Sheesh... That's creepy-ness, girl... Wait a sec, I recall something. An epilogue from after the story in which the house was burned down. In the Epilogue, it was Aria and Aten's 15th birthday and Marik got his son a Silver MIllennium rod. Incidently the ring that Aku was trapped in in that fic was part of the silver used to make the silver Millennium rod. Are you gunna build on that Epilogue at all or not? I'm just wondering and if you don't I'll have plenty of dreams so that it will live on. ^_^ Well, gotta go now. I gotta get going to Neopets so I can feed my Eyrie and my Gelert!

Ja Ne! ^_~
person Caterfree10
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

Oh....my....fucking...gOD!!! TRIPLETS?!?!?!?!?!?! *Insert VERY high pitched scream* WTFH?! Are you crazy?! Jeanie having TRIPLETS?!?!?! OH MY GoD IT'S A SIGN OF THE APOCALYPSE!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kyasarin: CAT!!!!! SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!! *Thwaps Caterfree upside the head*
Caterfree: OW!!! DAMN YOU!!! *Throws Kyasrin out of the window* Anyways, Gods! I can't wait until Turkey-day! DARN YOU!!! *Throws paper ball at moniter* Well, I have to go now. I dun wanna wait until jueves!! *pouts*

Ja Ne! ^_~
person Stableboy
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, some people need a reality check, you know? I liked your story, but you seem to repeat some things a lot and have some spelling errors. Maybe some college English classes in writing may help. Something to think about.
person Pain Addiction
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww...

That chapter with Aten and Robbie made me think of a Perfect Circle song called 3 Libra's.

Especially the line in the song, "Eyes of a fallen angel, eyes of a tragedy."


Maybe the baby is a hermaphadite?
person Caterfree10
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

WHAAAAAAAAAAAA?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! OMAE WO KOROSU!!!! OMAE WO KOROSU!!!!!! *Gets out triple blade knife* OMAE WO KOROSU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kyasarin: TAKE COVER!!!! *Hides in dumpster* Great, now you've done it.... cutting off like that does not go well with Cat as clearly seen -_-u She'll blow over soon... I hope. Let's just hope she doesn't start an over land hurricane. >< ANyways, you know what Cat wants: quicker updates and Me to go out and get supplies *very BIG sigh*

Ja Ne! ~_^
person Caterfree
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

*Falls over laughing* Gawd! That five hundred dollar moment comment in chapter 24 was priceless! And gosh those poor duel monsters... they got hit with mustard and ketchup *Bursts out laughing again* HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! *Ahem* Anyways, FINALLY! Serenity's stupid-ass butt is outta there! I think the only other person who's stupider than her is Anzu and that's saying a lot... Anyways I can't wait for the next chappie! and um, I can explain for not being here for a week. It's called computer being an ass and my sister having homework to finsh before the end of her grading period at her college. =_= OH well! i'm here now so yea! Gotta go now!

Ja Ne! ^_~