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by dragontamer00

person Megan Consoer
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chaoters?
person Dooter
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Loved it a lot... keep writing more Seto and Tea stories...
person rivgirl
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a sweet and great story, thanks for writing it, I like those kind of stories, it's a change from the same couplings I keep reading.
person riverkid2
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW That was good, Seto and Tea sitting in a tree *hits head* hey I am no a kid anymore, good story Seto in love with Tea, wonder how everyone is going to react. hmmmm, Can't wait for more post soon.
person riverkid2
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey good story, to think Seto and Tea wow, that was a goodie write more soon, I want to know if Seto allyally really does learn to love Tea, you give a big hint a the end that maybe they do or it could just be lust
person DKR
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that a story i Haven't read and you wrote so good in this story. Please update soon.Later!
person megumiii
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story!update update update
person DarkRain
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey kool story, Seto making Tea into a whore, nice. Oka bit of advice you might want ot space your paragraphs so its much easier to read and it also gives you more length so people don't say the chappies are too short. Also in the begininng you need to add a disclaimer. These are tidbits of problems that I've noticed, I don't know about your spelling or grammer I wasn't looking at them. Well have a lovely day. :)


~DarkRain~
person gluby
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the story is great!i just love tea/seto lemons!update update update!
person swissnights
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok so Seto is trying ake ake Tea in to a Whore. I so don't like that but some one has to do it. so why not you.