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for White Roses

by Subaru721

person BZLF
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. thats all I can say, is Wow..
You really know how to write a story. Even if I didn't quite understand certain words, I believe I understood the meaning behind them.
Congratulations on this.
person Pickle
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I never review Aff.n stories, but your storie is special. I really don't know how to put into words why I liked this story so much. It was touching and so different from what I normally read. Everything seemed to fit like a puzzle. And even though there was no real smut and an actual plot I enjoyed it. I even "awwwwed" at the ending paragraph.
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!

Lythande loves the story! ^^ I'm sure that's getting old by now, but still... heart. ^^ I thought I'd read it before, but now that I've read it I don't think so. Even if I did, it was great to reread it. ^_^ I love the Blue Eyes... the flowers... I actually don't know what white roses mean, but I'll be sure ot look that up. That scene with Seto and the guy in Teenaged Mokuba years was (forgive this for sounding weird) powerful...

Okay, enough with the creepiness from me.
SG
person Havoc TEllenoi
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. just wow. that was deep and amazing and wonderful and jsut plain awesome. it was really interesting and the metaphors were great as well. the white and red roses were a very nifty way to make conenctions. it was a beaufitul story.

person Tiffany
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant.
person strawberry poo kmoo
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, I loved it! you're a wonderful writer! Now I'm going to read this 10 more times! XD
person yami nefertira
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was sweet, you really got the brotherly devotion that mokie and seto have, well done and well writen
person praiseofshadows
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I've read this before, but I've never commented (bad me :( ). Anyway, I just wanted to say that I love this -- when I'm in a dark, bittersweet mood, this makes perfect reading! =D Also (and feel free to be like, "You're _way_ out of bounds"), I read your comment to nixwilliams on the review for "Wait For You Forever" about having more Seto/Mokuba stuff (yay!), and um...if you really would like to post them on the lj community (locketpair), I'd totally post 'em for you! All you'd have to do is email them to me with how you'd like to be credited (like pen name and stuff). You could even post this, if you wanted to. I know lots of people in the community like it.

Feel free to check it out at http://www.livejournal.com/community/locketpair . The memories section has quite a few fics though the mod's stopped updating for awhile to do RL stuff. But there's usually fic to be found on the members ljs as well. You could always get an LJ account and join us -- we're not a cult I swear! XD Well, I've rambled on enough...feel free to disregard. Still, though, I think "White Roses" is tops! Peace out! =D
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, thanks for reviewing! have you got any new stories on the go? would like to read more...!
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
had to re-read and re-review! still love it! one part has inspired a bit in ch 1 of my fic "Wait For You Forever"... please check it out, see if you like it?