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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O; the hell?!? Random OOCness attacks!!
what happened to all that Seto Pride!? Your turning him into a wimp T_T *sob* (i luv my Seto-bishie too much >D)
pretty nice story concept, but there was some parts of the story that where random and didn't make any sense concidering there character personalities...
what happened to all that Seto Pride!? Your turning him into a wimp T_T *sob* (i luv my Seto-bishie too much >D)
pretty nice story concept, but there was some parts of the story that where random and didn't make any sense concidering there character personalities...
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I have to say, the only thing that bothered me was how you didn't use a new paragraph for each person speaking; makes it more difficult to read. But in general I liked it, especially the Ryou characterization. Ja ne.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::cries:: More, please? God, I love this story. Urg, I can't even say "I love" anymore without getting the weirdest, most awful sensations. Anyway, I want Seto to end up with Jou and everything to be happy ever after, lol. I can't believe I just said happy ever after. I'm such a sap!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^, it's readable, ^.^ + not a bad coupling...poor seto, anywho..............s UPDATE!!!!!!!
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well . . . this is definitely a unique couple. Oh hell, the whole fic is rather unique, and has definitely caught my interest. Please do continue soon.
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg, PLEASE update asap! Lol I love it! And what en evil cliffy! Anw\yway, excellent story so far.
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cries* You are an evil, evil person!!!!!!! *sniff* But It was really good... I feel so sorry for Seto-kun!!!!!!!!!!! *wails*
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I HAVE to correct you; you uh kinda messed up with the words to the title. *sighes* The band is Disturbed and the song is Stupify and the lyrics are "Look in my face, stare in my soul" not "step". I made that mistake too..ut eut enough of that, I liked the story but certain parts coulda been longer. Overall, good job on the fic.
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Kaiba. Although I must not feel that bor hor him because I'm already anxious for the next chapter(insert evil grin here). ~Jade