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for Passing the Time

by SetosBelovedSlave

person perkyshadowgirl
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
best story EVER :D
add to it? pleeeese?! *makes puppy dog eyes*

in the way of constructive comment...i really like the detail you put into the seduction. most people just go right to the sex, but you focused more on the before they get there point, if that makes sense. mmmm! adored it!
person Rebecca
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Usually I don't read M/F, but this one actually worked for meich ich is /really/ saying something). Good job.
person leila
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
person leila
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
person leila
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
person leila
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
person leila
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!