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Yay! Anzu gets some! And she picked the perfect bishie, too. Well, the one I would've picked, anyway!
Yes, there are a few grammar problems, but you have good atmosphere and detail in your writing. I can't wait to read more of this!

wohaaaaa dude that was good, u betta update now we all wanna know wat's gonna happen next

I have serveal question. First why would adultfanfiction.net peeps report you? This is adultfanfic. So don't be scared to strut your stuff. Second question. Is there going to be a threesome involving Kaiba/Ryou/Tea? Your story is great so far. I like it's flow, keep it going gurl. Peace out.^-^ Oh I also have a fanfiction.net account. Name's Demon of Faith, if ya got a chance go check out stories. *HintHint My Gundam Seed Story* Cya around.

Hooray! ^-^ An Anzu/Bakura fan! Everyone is an Anzu basher and people who aren't seem to despise lemons....Those fools! Your story was great and I hope there are more writers like you. You are awsome and the story is awsome. ^-^

As much as I despise Anzu with the very core of my being, this was quite good. Your tense work needs a little help and there are some spelling errors, but with a little editing, life is good.