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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Kat
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good for Jou standing on his own feet financially! Well, trying to at least.

“And who had to pay 2 million Yen for driving drunk and short-cutting through the Domino Park in their Ferrari?”
OOOOOO *laughs hysterically* Naughty CEO

Hmmmm, I wonder how Seto will take the news of Jou's new job?? *g*

Short but fun! *blinks* Dude, did I just describe Yugi?

Kat
person saelbu
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, update soon. ^__^
person saelbu
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was great! But then again so were all the others, ja ne! ^_~
person Naye025
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The more I read this, the more I love it! So many different elements to one story and it just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait until the update, so update now...please...

Ja!
person Kat
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, I haven't died, dropped off the face of the earth or lost interest. My birthday present this year was a dead hard drive. Then the holidays hit. Then I couldn't find anything on AFF.net. I am so glad I found this. You've made it all better! *G*

Girl, that neighbor asking about vocal? When you're in a house and the neighbors come out to find out what all the howling is about, then you can be embarrased. Yes, true. *smirks*

I'm so glad you're writing this. I've missed it! 's wonderful!

Kat
person Chikky
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING THIS! I love it!
person Naye025
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG...That was hilarious!! It was so sweet when Yugi proposed to Anzu...and then the ring...when Yugi just blurted out rather loudly I may add... That was greatI can't wait until the next update. Oh and btw...I think I may speak from the ladies point of view when I ask...How big WAS that ring that was too small? ;)

Ja!
person Saelbu
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated. Loved this shapter. ^_~
person LadyGrey
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, lucky for you I was sick today and had the time to read /all 49 chapters/ of your story, since I hadn't started in on it before like a normal person....

I just couldn't stop! It makes it easier when the chapters are fairly short -- that's usually a bad thing in my book, but not when you seem to be udating regularly and there are so many to read all at once. Anyway, if you couldn't tell, I like your story and look forward to an update. Although I would look into a beta reader if I were you, just for typos and grammer -- it's not that bad, but some things you do need a second set of eyes to catch. Ja ne!
person Naye025 (I\'ll sign in one day)
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't stay away from this fic. It keeps getting better and better and better as the chapters go on. And the idea of them being engaged...awwwww It bought a tear to my eye. I especially love Seto/Jou stories and this one is one of the best I've ever read! I can't wait until your next update.

Ja!

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