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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Chikky
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I was just wondering when you were going to update.... please email me with an approximate time... thank you so much. By the way I love this story and thats why I want you to update.
person Naye025
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Loved that chapter! It was well worth the wait! Now, what could have Mokuba done?!

Ja!
person Kat
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“I’m seme!”
*howls* I can see them doing this!

“Fuck me, Katsuya, FUCK ME!!!”
For a second, Katsuya lost his rhythm.
and Kat loses her train of thought....

“You know, once you’re awake, I will have to tell you how beautiful you are, when you’re unconcious.”
*falls over laughing* That's so.... Jou.

*laughs* "that's what your eyes always do" Oooo some puppy is happy with himself! *cackles*

"The blond’s face went from a slight pink to an angry red then a deep, purplish blue, as his breathing grew more and more ragged, before he finally slumped to his knees, Seto catching him, before he hit the floor."
*shrieks in laughter* I love this part best! Seto's idea of revenge is just amazing!

"Seto only gaped at the blond he had left trembling and semi-concious on the beach, who was now approaching the fridge and picked out a can of soda, which he then pressed on the marks the tentacles had caused on his left arm."
*wipes tears from eyes* I love this so much. It's just so damned funny!

.... vanilla sirop? Oh. My. God. *fans self and wipes chin* Ummm.... oh my god. that's just... I so do NOT want to know where you got that idea! I don't wanna know!

Oooooooo Mokuba is soooo dead when big brother finds out.

Nice to see you back! *shakes head* That vanilla sirop is gonna have me wondering forever...

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh do tell! I want to know! LOL. Update soon, that was so damn good! ^_^
person yaoishoujo
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! I cried for Seto's death in the first chapter and cried during the most beautiful wedding ceremony in the last chapter! America needs to stop being so damned closed minded/hearted and let gays get married! They're people too, you know!? Those vows really got to me!*sniffles* So touching! I want to say, arigatou, for having those two get married. It warms my heart when I know someone else supports gay marraige! I could feel the love those two were sharing! Omedeto on your first yaoi novel! I'd say it was a winner! You are a true writer and a damn good one at that! Thank you for a wonderful, heart-tugging story about finding love!

The sex was great, too!~lol~=^_^= HOT, HOT, HOT!!!! It could have been more detailed, but I shouldn't complain. The story itself makes up for that! Okay, I've talked long enough! I might accidentelly turn my review into a novel!~_~ So, in conclusion, awesome story with a perfect ending? Is it the end..........? Are you planning on writing more than 52 chapters or am I just talking out of my ass right now?!-_-;;; In any event, you're a brilliant writer! Keep up the good work! Ja ne!
person Naye025
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was amazing! It almost had me crying especially during the wedding. That was great! You made me feel like I was getting married!! Great writing! I just can't get enough of this fic and please update soon or I'm going to go bananas! LOL

Ja!
person saelbu
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That wedding was beautiful, almost makes me want to get married... okay maybe not. ^_^o
Update soon! ^_^
person Kat
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles, blows nose* Ohhh lovely wedding ceremony! The vows... beautiful! Loved it! Mokuba's reactions were just funny. OOO the dance! I howled at Jou's threat. Go Puppy! Okay, I heard the dramatic music with the scene with the elder Jounouchi. Not liking that... *snickers* I know you. This ride is going to get scary, yes?

Can't wait! Great job as always

Kat

person Chikky
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I know I review you alot but thats good right? And the comment about the hands staying on the keyboard in another one of your stories... I feel the same way only about reading them. You have to make Seto and Jou's sex-scenes more detailed to make us fangirls (I know we all are who read this) feel like we are in the room wacthing them. Well that is the only critisism I have about this story in total in 52 chapters... way to go and keep upo the good smutty-ness!
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I luv it, I luv it, I LUV IT!!!! Wish he didnt have to die, but still its a great story. ^_^ *thumbs up*