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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Naye025
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One again another chapter that continues to amaze me! You are truly a WONDERFUL writer!! An inspiration to me! Even through 50+ chapters, your story hasn't missed a beat or managed to let me down. Not even once. I will continue to read this fic and I can't wait for the next update!

Ja!
person aspiker
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, Goodness. Sounds like there is going to be lots of trips to Germany in the near future...
person Pussycat
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Sumimasen gozaimasu for keeping you waiting, but I had to retrieve all the requested files before being allowed to attend your meeting. My name is Jounouchi Katsuya, at your service.”
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO What is the puppy up to??

"But if I have to work for it, fight for it, that’s when I feel like myself, when I can proof that I’m worth of every single thing I can call mine. Including you.”
*snickers* He's gotten much better at fighting with logic. Love it.

“Seeing how many times I can make you scream my name before you loose conciousness.”
*laughs* It's good to set goals.

“Hai. First comes the shouting contest, then the kissing contest and finally the screaming contest. Although mostly they move from shouting directly to screaming.”
*laughs hysterically* He makes it sound like a bad thing!!

Some twenty minutes later, the younger couple had to call in defeat…
*howls* i'd be surprised if they didn't call it quits first.

It got so bad, that Seto actually called in an ‘Contra-Burnout Vacation’
*jaw drops* Wait... wait wait wait. _Seto_ forcing _Jou_ to take time off?? *faints*

“They-they’re moving you up to the higher classes? You passed all exams for the current two semesters and are being cut short one year of studying?”
Wooohooo! way to go puppy!

“Define ‘foreign.’”

The blond gulped, then hushed:

“Germany.”
Ooooooooo you are mean! *laughs* keep patting yourself on the back, just don't let it delay any more updates. *smirks*

Kat
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, awesome, cool, great, ummmm WICKED!!! ^_^
person Chikky
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!!!

"AND DO USE THEM!"-> This was the best line in this chappie. I loved it and you need to write more... and detailed for your fans who love you greatly. Bai bai now~!
person akuchan
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto he;s lucky he didn't have a coronary walking in on Mokuba that way. That was way too funny, and Jou's reaction was perfect.
Great story.
Akuchan
person Kat
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on the 100+ mark!

Katsuya smiled again, before bending down and, grabbing Honda’s collar, snarled:

“Would you then mind to behave accordingly?”

*laughs*

Not only because Seto had allowed him to invite his entire class aswell as Yugi-tachi, but because he was dancing with Kaminari Reiko, his secret crush.
AWWWWWWWWWW that's sooo cute!

“’Because deep down in my heart I knew we were meant to be’- that’s sooo romantic!”

He sniffled and batted his eyelashes in a very girlish manner at Seto.
*howls*

OOOOOOOO lemon! lemon lemon lemon!! whoooooooo

Giving a tired smirk, the blonde muttered:

“What’s with you guys and getting laid on your birthdays?” before he joined his husband in dream land.
*falls over laughing*

I loved it!!!
person Chikky
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay so it only took you a month to update but you are forgiven because you gave your loyal fans 2 stories to hold them over till you got through it and where was smut, may i ask? Ah well... those meanies need to die~! Another well done chappie and hopefully you will be updating soon.
person Kat
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAY About time!

“And aren’t we glad, that both of this facts apply!” mumbled the younger one, before he made a mad dash for the door, narrowly escaping his brother’s hug.
*laughs hysterically* Go Mokuba! Loved his explanation of the deal.

*gasps* Jou's room! That's awful! *laughs* Well... Jou is a Kaiba now, it would stand to reason he'd pick something up from his husband.

Within a week, the culprits had been flushed out and forced to leave Toyohashi Daigakkou for good.
*applauds* Way to go Jou!!

“You did hear well, Kitamura-san. As of his upcoming sixteenth birthday, Mokuba will officaly take over the seat of vice-president of Kaiba Corp."
WOOOHOOO Mokuba! I think a lot of people forget just how smart that kid is...

“Yet, there is someone we both would rather see dead, ne?”
Uhhhohhhhh

Cradling the decrepit motherboard in his left arm, legs drawn to his body and screwdriver resting loosely in his right hand, Seto lay on the floor admidst cables, wires, RAMs and processors, fast asleep, a content smirk tilting his lips ever so lightly.
AWWWWWWWWW that's just so damned CUTE!! *laughs*

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated this... another excellent chapter. ^_^