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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person anubiset
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I need more. I gotta know what happened. Can I review more than once? Hmmm. I love your work so far. I hate them being hurt, but it does build the plot. I love how they can`t get enough of each other.
person neptuna
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just stopping when it gets better and better..don't do that!!!IT's really cruel. I am waiting for the next chapter!
person satisfied_frog
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really, c'mon on now!
person Anon
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeeeee is this considered a review.....It is AWESOME by the way.....

Ur devoted reader....well one of them, anywayz

Cheers ^_^
person Sushigurl
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yesyesyes contiue contiue!! No more teasers!!! Hey I've been wondering about your first chapter.....is it foreshadowing? ANYWAYZ I HOPE U HAVE ENOUGH REVIEWS!!!!! =)
person FW
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far! Seto doesn't really die in the end does he??? 0.0 I hope not, don't want him to ;_;
person Pussycat
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Iie, I’m fine. It’s just-this whole show reminds me of our own wedding, and that makes me..incredibly horny!”
*laughs* At least they don't make him cry!

Honey and Whiskey? *blinks* Really now, that sounds interesting.

"Now spread your legs, so I can fulfill my matrimonial duties.”
*falls over laughing* Seto would get right to the point.

The pictures Seto took at that very moment in time would make for many an embarassing moment for the four in the coming years…
All right!!! Blackmail material! Sweeeeeet!

“Why do you always have to leave me, Katsu-chan? Why is it you always keep slipping through my fingers, when I think we’re closest? How-how come you always seek refuge from me?”
Oy, he's clingier than those styrofoam pellets in bean bags (hey, you blow one up and see how clingy those damned things are!).

And no, Kat, five reviews from one and the same person do not count! ¬ ¬
*blinks innocently* I reviewed only once.
person Pussycat
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is not two reviews. it's one review for each chapter... *smirks* Can you count it as two reviews?

-“ Katsuya, matte-“
Click
-“…aishteru, Katsu-chan.”
awwwww

I miss you so much Seto, if it already feels like this after three days, I can’t even imagine how it will feel like in three weeks.
*sniffles* Poor puppy

When did I loose myself so much in you that I can’t find myself in my own reflection? How come I feel like breaking down and giving up when you’re not by my side?
Whoa..... Dude, that's saying a lot!

-“Hn. So basically, you called me to tell me that you once again reached for top and succeeded, and that’s why I must now spend holidays without my favourite playtoy?”
*falls over laughing* Again, right to the point! Poor Seto, no Christmas puppy for him. Sheesh, that's gotta be worse that coal in the stocking!

-“Heh. You’re cute, when you blush.”
-“I’m not blu-oh gods, now I am! Thanks a heap, koibito!”
*laughs hysterically because she's done that to people*

And now that we’re married, I find myself wanting to shout my love for you from the top of the roofs.
I know that it's romantic, but I keep imagining him really doing that and I can't help but laugh....

Snarling, Katsuya crossed the room, threw open the door-and stood face-to-face with his husband, who smirked and purred into his cell phone:
-“As I said, I assume that’s because I’m standing right in front of your door.”
*squeals and claps* Ooooo I love those kinds of surprises!!! *laughs*

“You can seme all you want later, just let me first, I have been hiding this hard-on since Frankfurt.”
Yup... right to the point.

Loved it.
Kat
person aspiker
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! It's hard to think that you're going to start to wind down the story....
person Saelbu
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter brought a tear to my eye. T_T

Update soon. ^_^