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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person chikky
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was specially notified!!! Thank you!! Another great chappie and I hope there is more to come forever and ever and if not this story then something else, right?
person chikky
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I thought this was going to be the last chapter, but obviously not.... thats a good thing ^_^;
person saelbu
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful!! ^__^
person Pussycat
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Have you ever heard of safer sex?!?”
Mokuba snorted and coughed up some cracker crumbs, and Seto choked on his tea, even as Shizuka and Honda turned a brilliant shade of red.
*giggles* Oooo, someone's on the warpath!

“I thought only pregnant women were supposed to have mood swings, ne?”
*laughs* So did I!

For a second, he swore, his husband just-vanished. He could see the couch, the table before it, the carpet underneath both furnitures, but no Seto.
*gasps* Nooo, he didn't just have some kind of premonition!

“I am not accepting this case, no matter what. The last time it caused me one hell of a lot of trouble and almost destroyed a young man’s life. Besides, I fail to see why one should even bother re-integrating this particular individual into society.”
Ooooo I can't figure out who that is (got a couple of ideas though)! Damn, gonna have to wait and see.

The white, green-embroidered wedding kimono only helped to accent Shizuka’s flower-like delicacy....
Ooooo Preeeeetty!!!

Honda felt himself like a bag of mouldering rags, although he looked rather impressive in his deep purple kimono with the golden obi.
*sighs* lovely, lovely! What a pretty picture they'd make!

Besides, Seto mused, knowing the effect the festivity had on Katsuya, this would surely make for an exiting event…
Seto shivered in delight and anticipation.
*laughs* Good for Seto, seeing the umm, silver lining in this!

if I ever finish this fic, that is, muahahahahahahaaaaa! ><(ducks various thrown objects, then runs for savety)
*growls* You'd better finish! *imitates Yugi's chibi eyes* Pweeeeeeease
person neptuna
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love it..your whole story from the beginning of the first chapter (where you made me cry..thank you very much ;-))
Well and of course I'm happy you took Leipzig as city for Jou..(If you couldn't guess..yes I live and study here).
So go on..I'm waiting for the next chapter
person Kat (who\'s too lazy to sign in)
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's not the styrofoam pellets you blow up, it's the beanbag chairs! *smirks* It's too messy to be a hobby. *blinks* besides I ran out of beanbag chairs a couple of decades ago -when the were _first_ popular.

Closing his eyes, Katsuya decided to rest a little before the duel.
Just a couple of minutes…
*cackles* Oh, it's never just for a couple of minutes!!!

“You mean, we should have let this sleeping dog lie, huh?”
OOOOOOOOOOOO Them's fighting words! *laughs* Just ask his husband.

“For another time, let sleeping dragons lie, ne?”
SEE!!! I told you!

“Once we get back home, remind me to thank you appropriately for listening to you and joining the local DuelMonsters club, ne?”
*laughs hysterically* I see painful times ahead for him...

Katsuya swore that, despite the distance, he could hear the CEO’s jaw hitting the desk.
*rolls on floor howling* I loved this visual!

Encouraged by this, the two friends managed to pass with little trouble and Gokasho even won the prize for best dissertation of the semester, Jounouchi a close second.
WOOHOOO!! Go Jou! yeah, yeah, okay. go Gokasho too. *G*

“Then let me put you to bed, aibou” purred the CEO.
Giving his husband a wary look, Katsuya mumbled:
“I’d rather the couch, thank you very much.”
*giggles madly* Smart Puppy!

*reads the teasers and starts sniffling all over again* I don't wanna remember how it began, err ended... GAH, you know what I mean.

The hobbies are reading, writing and knitting (amongst others). Not spreading styrofoam pellets. Honest. No, really. It's true!
person LadyGrey
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here I am reviewing, because it was so long without an update I don't think I could stand waiting again. I really like this story, except I keep cringing when I remember how it all started in Chapter 1 -- anyway, please update, and let the misadventures continue. Ja!
person Saelbu
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are so evil for putting in those teasers!!! T_T

But I loved this chapter, it was brilliant!! ^__^
person Saelbu
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter! I loved it! ^__^
person chikky
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope this review counts!! I loved the letters they were all very well written and I love your writing... although I miss the smut. Bring it back please?

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