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OMR, I'm sorry I didn't review the last few chapters! I'm very glad you're still writing this story, I read chapters 1-45ish in one sitting and have been reading your updates ever since. I can't believe you have Seto thinking Katsuya's cheating on him! Can't wait for the next update, this is one of my favorite Seto/Jou fics. Ja ne! ~LG

oh my go I just started reading this story and couldn't stop. When is the next chapter comming out. Oh my god I want to know what happens. I'm so addicted it's sad.

Okay so you go away for a month and a bit. And then you give me this? Cute enough yes but.... jeeze why with Mokie... they are like brothers now? Anyways.... yet another good chapter, up until the point of making me mad, and keep it up!

Okay wait... now I'm confused.... are they together??? Hurry up and update so I know~!

The story has taken many interesting turns, but a few things remain the same. I find that Jounouchi claims that he's "not his property" a lot. Strange thing about it is that I don't think Seto ever forgets that (nowadays, in terms of the story). Jounouchi never lets him forget it ("He needs to learn" and blah, blah, blah). It's funny, but Jounouchi seems so intent on asserting his freedom over Kaiba that he doesn't discuss things over with Seto, he just steamrollers right over him. If Jounouchi decides he wants to do something, he does it. He just tells Seto about it after he's made the decision, even when it affects both of them (i.e. trip to Germany, long separation) and seems to guilt Seto into giving in. I don't remember a single moment (well, maybe in the beginning) when Seto guilts Jou into doing anything or makes a decision and gets away with it. :p Jou's starting to make me feel like he's a bit manipulative. Seto seems more able to separate his job from his home life, but Jou can't seem to do the same. Kaiba never says obey me because I'm your husband, he says I'm your boss and president of the company you work for. Jou's taking it too personally.

I'm starting to feel sorry for Seto.

Thanks again for an update! Yah!!!!! Just a few notes though...Dito is actually spelled Ditto. Also. Seto was not 'whacked' with tears, he was 'wracked' with tears. Iknow it was probably an hones typo, but I had to admit - you got a chuckle out of me over that one. I kept picturing a HUGE tear standing behind Seto whacking him over the head! Thanks again for an update, I've been keeping my eyes out for it. I check every night ^^.

Welcome back! 8-)

Yeppers, that's one evil cliffie...

Ok, well, I know that Jou and Mokuba aren't cheating on Seto, so it must be something else they are talking about. yes you are EVIL.

UGH!!! You MUST continue! I was reading and reading....and suddenly I was at the end of the page! And I was like, NO! I MUST continue READING!!!! Ooooh! Why must you be so good at tension???? T-T

Anyway, glad you're back. Have a nice holiday?? :3

-Amy

What a way to make a strong comeback! That was amazing, and well worth the wait! Update as soon as you can. ^_^