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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Lore
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm, I believe your three weeks have past a long time ago...
What's keepin' ya?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Don't you know that I'm addicted to this fic, and that now my hands are shaking, my temperature is rising and god
knows what else, just because I dind't get my shot on time?
Yes feel guilty, VERY guilty...

P.S. Awesome fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Chikky
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay... so uh. crap~! Jou is in trouble.

Anyways... the chappie was awesome and I loved the plot twists. You need to start writing in what all your japanese means again XD~! Cause I'm dumb and don't know... Anywas, hurry and update again~!
person Naye025 (Not signed in)
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I'm sooooooooooooooo happy that you updated!!! YAY!!!! I LOVED this chapter, as well as the previous 66! :) I loved it when Jou tied Kaiba to the bed and left him there and then Kaiba saying 'I got to use the bathroom.' Hope Jou comes back soon!! :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ja!
person LadyGrey
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always enjoy scrolling through the recent updates and remembering this story is still out there and unfinished. Glad you're still writing, please update again as soon as you can. Ja ne. ~LG
person fw
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very entertaining! I was waiting for this chapter, great job. Kaiba and Jou made up! And annoyed Mokuba to no end. Perfect!
person Jessica
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a very beautiful comeback! Can't get enough of their hotness! And the lovemaking scene was tres bien! Well done! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Ja! ^_^
person Rose
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I completely love this story. You had me crying over the death of Kaiba but you didn't kill him off yet. This is an emotional roller-coaster. One minute im happy and laughing then the next im sad and crying. I can't believe that Kaiba gets jealous and possessive like that. It shows that he cares but sometimes he gets a little carried away. He also loves to jump to conclusions. I could go on forever talking about this story but I'll spare you. So please update it SOON!!!!
person LaBratt
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I came across your story when I could not sleep. I stayed up all night and read the entire story. I write as well as teach for a living, so it is not easy to impress me or hold my attention. You managed it nicely. Please keep up the good work.
person Hikari Raine
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG when it said "neither did your brother" I thought you had the nerve to whack off mokuba i was already screaming NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! then i read on. lovely story. hope you update soon

Ja ne
person Hikari Raine
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is good. You evil author you that cliffie is driving me up the wall where is that update?! Please !!! i wanna know what happens next