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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Saelbu
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! ^_^
person Saelbu
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another beautifully written chapter, I loved it. Update soon, ja! ^_~
person Saelbu
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And you know you sparked my interest. Update soon. ^_~
person Kat
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* I love being spoiled! WOW! Three chapters. Sweeet! I have to find a copy of "The Mirror Crack'd". That's one I haven't seen. Hmm, wonder if it's in the book... Oh lordy, I'll have to go to the bookstore this weekend. *snickers*

Shiiiiit, that's one hell of a Lemon. Whoa, Seto snapped big time!! I'm still in shock over the fact Jou made that offer! Gotta hand it to Honda for how he handled the situation. I swear, I like him better in some of the fanfics than the manga or series.

Oh, you just made my weekend. Will make up for the days I can't get to the internet this weekend.

Yes, i still remember how it ends, but I'm loving this story!

La, Spoiled Kat very happy!

person Kat
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* But I wanna be spoiled by the updates! Good chapter! I loved the description of how Seto and Jou are reacting to each other. Honda's reaction was pretty interesting. I want to see what goes on between he and Jou now. My jaw hit my lap when Jou didn't react to Yugi's tears at all. Damn.. that was a shock!

I'm gonna hope for more spoiling. *smirks* Great job

Kat
person Kat
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SHiiiiiit! I'll say you avoided the fluff! Damn, I didn't expect it'd be Kaiba picking himself up off the floor! *snickering* I can only imagine how you learned those rules.

Loved it! Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Kat
person aspiker
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That ending/beginning was very touching and sad. I'm looking forward to seeing from the beginning how the story progresses to this end point....
person Kat
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here I was cheering and clapping because you started a new story and you went and made me cry! Oh my God, that was just heartwrenching. Beautifully written, but damn make me cry, you snot!

Even knowing how it ended, I want to see how it began! Therefore, you'd better update! *grins*

Kat