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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Kat
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, fast update. short, but fast. *blinks, left eyelid twitches* Not going there... *smirks*

"Jou shot up-and connected face-first with Seto’s forehead."
*cracks up* Love it!!! I mean, owwwie. *cackles*

Crossing his arms, Mokuba huffed:

“Fine, now that that is settled, would you mind telling me, what the two of you are doing here?”

He paused, then added:

“Aside of screwing each other senseless, that is.”

Mokuba got the satisfaction of seeing both Jou and Seto face-fault.

*falls over howling* Ten points for Mokie!!

Good work!
Kat
person Kat
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh.... wow. I'm floored. Poor puppy. *sniffles* Damn, it does make up for the cliffhanger. Ch, you knew it would. *g* Great job. Yeah, it wouldn't have read right if you'd split it in half. Fantastic.... can't wait to see the next chapter!

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter, I can't wait to read the next chapter, hope you update soon, ja! ^_^
person Kat
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*swat* and you cackled every minute when you wrote that cliffie! You evil, evil stinker you.

I can't wait to see how they work this out! *laughs* They're just way too much fun like this. Sooo, how did Seto get a key to the teachers john?!

Sheesh, I bet Honda's gonna love the peace and quiet away from the Bitchy Bois...

Kat
person Kat
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Lots of chapters! *G* Okay, two... but they just made my day. Love it! Just fantastic!!! *bounces up and down* I's just such a happy Kat!

*blinks* Noooo, I only had one beer. Honest!

KB
person Saelbu
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter, can't wait to read more. ^__^
person Saelbu
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My power's back on and I'm able to read and review once more! Ah, it's good to be back, lol. Anyway, I loved this story and I absolutely can't wait to continue reading it, update soon, ja! ^_~
person Kat
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, poor Honda. All confused. I loved Seto's comment about the grey cells sloshing under the hair. That was priceless! Wow, Jou's reaction at the end! You did a really good job writing that too! You're right, Jou strikes me as the kind of guy who does regret things deep down.

Loved it!
Kat
person Kat
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* What a thing to come home to! Three new chapters! *glomps Felidae* Thank you!

Hmm, is it just me, or does Seto's behavior with the schoolwork, extra stuff and the whip sound like Gozuboro?

*falls over laughing* Physics as sweet nothings! Oh my god, I love it! Shiiit that's just too fricken' funny! Poor Jou....

*reads Jou's story about his nickname* Oh shit... Wow. *gasps* Honda!? Shiiiitwondwonder he was so freaked!

Wait!!! That's it?! Oh #&$%*&$ More, please!!! I swear, this time I won't go babysit the hyper niece and can review faster! *grins*

gods, fantastic.

Kat
person Kat
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo so that's how it went down! Oh gods, leave it to Jou to tell that story and then make that comment about not being a virgin anymore! *laughs* Ooo did he just outsmirk Kaiba? Yup, I believe he did.

*reads the last lines* You're just evil! Dayum, another new chapter... Fantastic! I'm so loving this story (especially since I refuse to think about how it ends *smirk*).

I love it when you update so fast. I'm just a happy, spoiled Kat!

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