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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Kat
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet save on Jou's part! The burger sounds good. Figures, it's dinner time and I haven't eaten since breakfast! *smirks*

Loved this nice, quiet chapter. Can't wait for you to turn the plot into a pretzel!!

Kat
person Kat
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks for the first time in ten minutes* ...
Wow! Damn... Seto would be top even if he was the one being screwed!

Cool chess set! Pity there aren't any pictures! Gotta love Jou's ideas of surprises. Seto might actually learn to like them now? *EG*

I can't help it, I'll I keep thinking is "Happy Fucking Birthday" *smirks*

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those two chapters were amazing, I can't wait for you to update. ^_^
person Saelbu
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful!! I think I'm going to cry. Update soon. *Wipes tears from my eyes* ^_^
person Saelbu
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story, it has everything. Romance, angst, drama, ah......okay enough of that, update soon I can't wait to read more, ja! ^____^
person Kat
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the last chapter best! That was wonderful. Yessss, I can so see Jou telling him to invite the Emperor.

Ohhhh I hope they give Seto a great 18th birthday party, even if it is just Jou and Mokuba.

*laughs* I don't mind the "soundtrack", honest.

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work, update soon. ^___^
person Saelbu
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Wonderfully written chapter, hope you update soon. ^__^
person Angel-Belle
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jou! I like this story...but the ending is soo sad!!
person Saelbu
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I knew it was too good to be true! T_T

I hope things get better for them, ja! ^_^