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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Naye025 (didn't feel like signing in)
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I've only read the 1st 10 chapters so far and it's AWESOME!! I love the beginning when Kaiba died!! *sniff!!* And the
part where Jou rapes Kaiba! I thought it was the other way ar! Yo! You're a wonderful writer and I can't wait until I can finish
reading the rest!

Ja!
person Kat
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo lovely! Sweet and lovely. I can't wait for the second year!

Great job!
Kat
person Saelbu
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was sad and beautiful all at the same time. I can't wait to read more. ^__^
person Saelbu
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW I love this story. I can't wait to read more, ja! ^_^
person Kat
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“Simple. As representant of Kaiba Corp, I achieved a judical restriction on any printed matter concerning my person. If you are not with the press, you have no right to take or sell pictures of me, without facing a serious lawsuit.”

Oy, get a shovel. This bull's getting deep!! *smirks*

Loved it. Sooo that's why he wants to go away! It makes absolute sense then. I like how you wrote thaole ole scene!

*cracks up* he needed a swift kick in the arse not thbut but but I loved that part best!

Kat
person Kat
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yugi indifferent to anything is surprising. Gods, I about hurt myself laughing at Jou's responses to the principal. That was just priceless! You're right; no one said anything about them not leaving. *smirks*

Loved it and thanks for the laughs!

Kat
person kat
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* pole-axed Yugi and Honda! Perfect! The fluff is worth it. Soooo, why I Jou so hot on going to Tokyo? Can't wait to see the twists! Ooo and the make up sex!

Kat
person Kat
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yesss, very sweet! I loved every word of it! I did. Had a long, icky day and I'm sicker 'n a dog. This just made me feel good.

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Simply Kawaii! I loved that chapter. ^___^
person Saelbu
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. T_T

I loved it. Update soon. ^__^