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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jou is so funny. ^_^ Another amazing chapter. I can't wait for another one. ^_^
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Flipping his koi over, the blond taught Seto how to properly fuck somebody unconcious.
*howls* Way to go Jou!!!
*falls over laughing* Jou's temper and mood swings are more fun than a rollercoaster! I loved it.
WOOHOO on his scholarships. That last line was perfect!! *cackles*
Good job, girl! Oh, thanks for the head's up about the pict Um Umm, and the tissues. *winks and wipes nose*
Kat
*howls* Way to go Jou!!!
*falls over laughing* Jou's temper and mood swings are more fun than a rollercoaster! I loved it.
WOOHOO on his scholarships. That last line was perfect!! *cackles*
Good job, girl! Oh, thanks for the head's up about the pict Um Umm, and the tissues. *winks and wipes nose*
Kat
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another well written and enjoyable chapter. ^__^
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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"And he swore, to keep that most fragile of gifts safe at any cost."
That is just soo sweet, and so Jou!
"If you want to live to see life a ripe and happy age, don’t make fun of Kaiba Seto."
*cracks up* I can see Jou opening up the proverbial can o' whoopass on people for talking badly about Seto.
"And then his jaw fell through all forty-seven stories of the hotel."
*laughs hysterically* shocked much?
Loved it. Damn, wish I could see the pic you spoke of.
That is just soo sweet, and so Jou!
"If you want to live to see life a ripe and happy age, don’t make fun of Kaiba Seto."
*cracks up* I can see Jou opening up the proverbial can o' whoopass on people for talking badly about Seto.
"And then his jaw fell through all forty-seven stories of the hotel."
*laughs hysterically* shocked much?
Loved it. Damn, wish I could see the pic you spoke of.
schedule
September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^ Another excellent chapter, amazing story.
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD, I Love You !!!!
Great Chapter, and the lyrics are great too
***“I stand-uhh-corrected-aah-you are-uhn-imposs-ibly loud!" At this point, Jou was way past caring***
XD, love that
Great Chapter, and the lyrics are great too
***“I stand-uhh-corrected-aah-you are-uhn-imposs-ibly loud!" At this point, Jou was way past caring***
XD, love that
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent. I can't wait to read more. ^___^
I so love this story. ^____________^
I so love this story. ^____________^
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Jou's response to things is just hysterical. Ya gotta love Seto's ability to figure out things like taking the train elsewhere to meet up with Jou. Hiroyuki is just cute and funny! I loved the whole dancing scene. I kept waiting for Jou to say "ow" between counts though. I can't wait to hear what Seto's first impression of the dance lesson is though.
Oh, you know I'm loving this!
Kat
Oh, you know I'm loving this!
Kat
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tsk, short yes. However, you caught me far enough off guard by that last paragraph and Seto's comment about Jou's noise levels that I nearly choked on my dinner! Loved it. Damn, you shocked the hell out of me when he knelt in front of Jou! That was totally unexpected! I know you say you're not happy with this chapter, but that just means you'll work harder on the next one. riiight? *grins evilly and runs off*
La
Kat
La
Kat
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O
OMG, I just read all the chapterS and i'm just Impressed, you are such a talented girl, you got me crying at chapter 1
and then i read about the rape, and i was Shocked i mean Jou how could you ...
all the chr arr are just amazing, the story of why Katsuya hates his name, was just Sad, and of course thank you so much for giving Honda a good part
in the Fic, he is such a great Boy.
Other thing that i liked about this fic, was how the KaiJou relationship was developing, and only Honda was aware of it.
"dispaying knowledge was as gra tua turn-or thr the CEO", --- So Seto XD*
"There must be about four dozen rooms in this house. Why can’t you take it somewhere less public?” --- LOVE YOU MOKUBA ---
Chapter 21 was just sweet and chapter 31 ... how could you ended up in there and say its just a "itsy-bitsy mini-cliffie", Im dying in here X_X, i just feel that this is going to get bad, and I hope I'm wrong *Nah, love angst, coz the make-up get's hot, well that's how i see it XD*
Damn this is getting long, and i don't want you to get Bored, so i think that's it. LOVE YOUR FIC !!!!
P.S: Sorry for any error that this review may have, jejeje, english is not my languaje
UPDATE ASAP, PLEASE !!!!!
OMG, I just read all the chapterS and i'm just Impressed, you are such a talented girl, you got me crying at chapter 1
and then i read about the rape, and i was Shocked i mean Jou how could you ...
all the chr arr are just amazing, the story of why Katsuya hates his name, was just Sad, and of course thank you so much for giving Honda a good part
in the Fic, he is such a great Boy.
Other thing that i liked about this fic, was how the KaiJou relationship was developing, and only Honda was aware of it.
"dispaying knowledge was as gra tua turn-or thr the CEO", --- So Seto XD*
"There must be about four dozen rooms in this house. Why can’t you take it somewhere less public?” --- LOVE YOU MOKUBA ---
Chapter 21 was just sweet and chapter 31 ... how could you ended up in there and say its just a "itsy-bitsy mini-cliffie", Im dying in here X_X, i just feel that this is going to get bad, and I hope I'm wrong *Nah, love angst, coz the make-up get's hot, well that's how i see it XD*
Damn this is getting long, and i don't want you to get Bored, so i think that's it. LOVE YOUR FIC !!!!
P.S: Sorry for any error that this review may have, jejeje, english is not my languaje
UPDATE ASAP, PLEASE !!!!!