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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Muraki
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*God Dammit I Love you Mokuba*

Seto cringed, when his little brother threw a full-grown temper tantrum, something he rarely did.

And Damn, This is getting better an better, i hope you update soon
Seto you are evil, Evil i tell you, but you are to good at it XD

person Kat
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Oh, looks like somebody forgot someone’s birthday, ne? Ah, yes, the pain, the hurt, the betrayal…^^"
*tiredly attempts to swat author* the evil effing cliffhanger...

Gotta love Mokuba! Really, he is so good at herding his brother that it's beyond funny when he gets his undies in a bunch. Dayum, but that was an awful tease you put in when he first runs into Seto. Especially after yoprompromised a make up session. Evil thing you...

Mokuba's right though. Seto should have said thank you. Or at least give him a bonus. Idiot genius...

More please?
Kat
person Saelbu
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!! ^__~
person Kat
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, not gonna hit you for this. I think all of the booze you mentioned that Seto can drink without a problem are white liquors. Scotch is a brown liquor and some people can drink one kind but not the other. You must never switch either (start with, say white, and switch to brown). Yesssss, I'm old enough to have learned this. No, I'm not tel you you how.

Loved the anagram. Sweet move. Stupid Seto. *smirks*

More please??

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated, I can't wait to read more, I hope everything works out for Jou and Kaiba. Ja! ^_^
person Naye025
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those piespies were awesome as usual! I can't wait to see how they make up and then their wedding! Ooooo!! I'm so excited! Can't wait
to read more, so please update soon. As I said earlier, you're a terrific writer and keep up the great work!

Ja!
person Kat
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blows nose and sniffles* I should hit you.... I seriously should hit you. Gods, as if you didn't make me cry enough with the first chapter. What does one say? Good job writing this. Obviously! *g* I can't wait to see the next chapter to find out what happens (please don't let Jou cut his hair!!).

I really should hit you though....

Or make you pay for more kleenex.

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Talk about trouble in paradise. Update soon, I want to find out what happens next! ^_^
person Escaflowne Angel
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i red your story... and i loved it... and then i read the "in end end" chapter again after i had read the whole thing... and now i cant stop crying... oh god... SETO!! **bawls like a newborn** i oved your story... it was absolutly aw.. k.. keep up the good work....oh god...seetoooooo.....

-Marty-san
person Muraki
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, here i was so happy because you make an update, and then ... all falls down *i'm still happy though*
I mean why ?? ;_;
God damn, i just love this angst, and i'm waiting for the Make-up scene, it's gonna be one, Right? o.O and soon, Right ?, why? because i think it's gonna be Hot and really, really Sticky.

Great Chapter, Update Soon