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I know how it is . . . It's just so much FUN to torture the characters--the poor, unwittiinnoinnocent creatures that they are. I can't blame you, since I (and my little sister moreso) am guilty of such cruelty it too. ^_^;;

And for today's Useless Piece of Information: "Have I Told You Lately That I Love You?" is by either Phil Collins or Rod Stewart. I can't remember who specifically (I think it's Rod Stewart)--I always get them mixed up.


~LS

You know the weird thing about all this is that I understood every word of what Jou was saying, lol. Update soon. ^_^

My that was interesting, okay that was the understatement of the year, update soon. ^_^u

I get the point! LOL. I'll stop with the spelling...but if you ever do decide you want one, I don't mind. I nearly chocked when i read that abohe she sneeze. I have an extremely powerful, loud sneeze and I have hit my head on the keylock that sticks out of a file cabinet, on the back of a headrest in a car, as well as, and I kid you not, smack dab in the middle of Les Miserables when the messeanger buy is dying on the top of the mound. Dead silence all throught the place, and I have to sneeze while everyone around me is either sniffling, or all out crying. My in-laws STILL won't let me live that one down! I love the swecenecenes between Seto and Joey, and I love that Seto made Joey a caregiver. By the way, in case you wanted to know, that song was by Rod Stewart, and you're right, it's a great song.

Great chapter, and I loved the gift fanart you gave me for my b-day! ^__^

I didn't know that about brunet. I know blond sometimes had an 'e' on the end. Thanks for educating me in french 'english. I recently learned the same thoing about canadian 'english'. They like to add an extra 'u' to words like colour (color), honour (honor), etc. I learned that while editing for a yaoi manga scanlation group (Fushichou), if you've ever heard of it. I saw some more words in this chapter that were typos - and I'm not talking about the Katsuya conversation - that's was obviously speeled that way for phoenetic reasons, to make him 'sound' sick! I really have enjoyed this story, and can't wait to see where else it goes, but I hate the thought that it will end in such a terrible way. I hope it turnes out that that is not the 'true' ending. It just seems so sad. Any, th, thanks again for explaining that to me, and please keep updating this great story!

This is the perfect B-day present, I'm so glad you updated, can't wait to read more. ^__^

This is a really good story and I have loved every bit of it, but I thought you might want to know you have several misspellings. They are:

qiuet - I think you m to to say quite.
brunet - is spelled brunette.
aswell - you have this as one word.
savely - I think you meant safely.
encaged - did you mean encased here?
wich - should be which
jewelery - is spelled jewelry
overmode - not an english word. Maybe you meant overload?
migrane - is spelled migraine

Just thought you might want to know in case your first language isn't english and you wanted help to improve it.

That was soooooooooooooooo cute! I love this story, probably the best Seto/Jou I've read in the longest time. I absolutely loved it. Enough Jou-angst for the whole family... or not... that would just be wrong -_-' Unless you count your really close Yaoi-fan friends as family, then I think it does count... right? Doesn't it? Oh well, I loved it and I hope to read more stories by you, this was terrific! ^.~

~♥~ Li

That was beautiful! T_T *cries* It almost makes me want to get married, and I do mean ALMOST! Ja ne. ^_~