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i love your story.... but i found that chapter 34 and one before it are missing... but im having to stop since it seems chapter 34 is a crucial chapter before 35. is there any way of uploading chapter 34

I know its been years and I do hope your well...but after re-reading it again...I come to the same conclusion. I miss you and you need to come back and finish this epic...So I beg.

Please return after 4 years and finish what you started!

I do hope you do decide to come back to the story it has been months since you posted

Where are you?????????

Please continue this beautiful story!
Don't discontinue it!

It is a BEAUTIFUL story!!!
Took me one week^^' till chapter 70 (well I'm not a slow reader, but I was very busy and I had to read it between my breaks)
I want to say that the beginning of the first chapter is really sad. I had teary eyes when I arrived at the end of it and I wondered what you could write more. But when in the next chapter I saw Jou raping Seto, I said WOW... and then I couldn't leave the story.
Your style of writing is great. And the story is very fluent. I really didn't feel like reading 70 chapters because I was so engrossed in the story that I didn't feel the lenght of the story and I enjoyed every single chapter.
Seto and Jou are so awesome together. You write hot lemons, fluffy moments. All is so sweet and touching.
I can't believe that they still have only two years before Seto dies.
I hope that they will spend two last beautiful years together before Seto goes. Oh my God that's so sad.
I really wonder what is the final chapter will be about and from the spoilers that you left well it is sad (obviously)...
I remember one of the spoiler about Jou looking at a painting of Seto... and that was sooooo sad. I was almost crying while reading it.
And when in one of the chapter, for one moment, Seto like disappeared in front of Jou. It was like a prediction for SEto's death. I think that I panicked like Jou did^^'.
Seto and Jou are so beautiful together and their love is simply beautiful
And I loved what Mokuba said about Jou when Seto was doubting that Jou was cheating on him with his brother. That was really strong. I really wonder what Jou is gonna do after Seto's death. And like Mokuba said, he is gonna die for sure....
Oh my God! why Seto had to die...
what happened?
and by the way, what is Jou preparing with the strange guys? why did he want to destroy Seto?
He didn't love him first but later on he fell in love with him? This is what happened?

Your story is beautiful, sweet and well seeing the beginning sad.
I'm really afraid from the end.
But well the best couple ever still have 2 years and so many chapters.
Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.
I want to know what to happen. And I really wonder what will be Seto's reaction. Does he know about what Jou is about to reveal?

Update!!!!!!!!!!!
Sooooooooonnnnnnnnn

3 hours later and I finally finished reading this story. Such a wonderful and DEVIOUSLY delicious story.


And I thought *I* was a pervert...

Damn girl you put me to shame........well done!

NOOO!!! Where's the rest??? This is such a great story!!

PLEASE PLEASE!!! Update soon!!!

~*m0vi3ang3l*~

mmmm...that was so hot. Wonder if Jou will return the favor on his birthday and show up with a feather or maybe more?

mofaf1

OMG an update. But I have a question for you. Why feathers???


Good chapter as always and I can't wait for more~!!!

Wow... 'Not Dead Yet' is definately a more befitting title! Not that I'm really complaining, I love that I've been reading this story for what seems like (and most probably *is*) years... I can't stand it when stories end. Nice update, yes it was a little freaky with the feather but what else should I expect from your obviously twisted mind? Thanks for the holiday update, I love getting yaoi presents. Ja! ~LG