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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a kind of story is this?? I don't hate you. I NEVER mean to hate you. but this story is totally stupid and lame! What a kind of yami do such a thing to his hikari!!! and kaiba isn't such a horrible person. If I were yugi, I would cut yami's member. laugh!
By the way in next time you should be careful to describe mans personarity. I always hate yami in this whole story, and I always feel suck. If you would mean to, you succeeded it!
By the way in next time you should be careful to describe mans personarity. I always hate yami in this whole story, and I always feel suck. If you would mean to, you succeeded it!
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW GREAT STORY, surprised me but I wish it ended better, but hey your the author so do what you want.
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! That's so sad! But at least Yuugi lives... But his has no real flesh legs T_T Oh well. at least he's alive ^^ *glomps you* You didn't kill him off ^^. Well, I think, he'll have amnesia for... the next two chapters ^^. Update soon please!
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nuuuuuuuuuu!!! Poor Yuugi-san! He won't ever be able to walk with his legs again *sniff*. Evil... Hit and run driver >_>. Yuugi has amnesia, yes? Hope some kind of miracle turns up and Yuugi doesn't have to get his legs... Removed... Or Yami could use magic to heal him... Maybe. Update soon please!
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is incredibly easy to read! but Yami and Seto fucking?! -shudders- mer, it sends a chill down my spine. i despise Kaiba with a passion, but i'll live. good story... Yugi can't loose his legs! -whine- -runs in circles- Oh well, I'll live. Yami and Yugi have to get back together... they are the second best yaoi couple.... Marik X Yami, Marik X Malik are third... the first? Duo X Heero of course! -run!- good story, i hope to see more of this story! -more running-
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOo!!! This is so good! A lot of angst too ^__^. Please update soon! Though, you should make Yuugi and Jou move to a different country or something, and become something famous or whatever, they come back and are more mature and sexy XD. And Yami and Seto wanting them back XD. Well, that's just a random idea I just thought up. I dun care if you use it or not. Please update soon!
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that last chapter and the Seto/Yami fucking started to piss me off, no offense though because the fic wealleally good. But.....I prefer Yami/Yugi together, as do others. *notices angry mob of Yami/Yugi supporters circling around a fire holding "I'm For Yami and Hikari Love" signs while burning Kaiba pics* HEY! I am struck with inspiration! You should have Bakura start working with Kaiba and Yami, and then Bakura ends up fucking Kaiba!!!!! Crazy idea, but it can happen! Kaiba needs a "Ring Shine" anyways, hehehe
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Every one is fucking the other boyfriend. Well. Um. What can I say but keep it up and please email at puffin04@bellsouth.net when you update. Please. Thank you.
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! See ya later!
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OoOo!! I love this fic so far! Please update this real soon! btw, do you have a mm.org or ff.net account?