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for Law and Order

by MagentaFox

person Pink Sui Suki
schedule March 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my good God you WILL update this. *mumbles to self and wacko yami* Pssh, thinky cay can leave me hanging like this, who do they think they are anyway?
Eiji: Oh shut up Suki.
Eat me yami.
Eiji: Can I?
Er...no! *whispers* later! Now go away!
Eiji: Score! *runs off*
Annnyway...GIMME MAH LEMON WOMAN!
person devilburns
schedule March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Write more soon please!!!!

this is a really good story
person Princess Deathscythe
schedule March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So far it's really good...but did you really have to stop!!!! Please keep writeing. I wanna see what happens!!!
person Evil Windstar
schedule March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol. I like watching "Law & Order" and ur mean for stopping so soon! U gave us a hang cliffer!! How dare u. :) pleaz continue very soon.
person GODDESSsisters
schedule March 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EVIL CLIFF-HANGER OF DOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Grrrrrr...........i............need.............Lemon.............PLEASE?!?!?!?! I'LL GIVE YOU A COOKIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person YamiHikariRaye
schedule March 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yami Raye: Who said we don't want Ch.2 i know I do. and if-
Hikari Raye: Stop right there i know what you are going to say but don't or else i'll lock you in your soulroom.

Yami Raye: You Wouldn't even try it

Hikari Raye: Oh wouldn't i?

Yami Raye: Whatever Hikari, but PLEASE update.

Hikari/Yami Raye: Update! Update! Update!