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wow this is cool and you killed my least favourite character ^_^

Yeah! I just love L&O! Great idea to use it for a fic! Very original!

:) Actually, if Seto Kaiba WAS arrested for the murder of Anzu, then he could walk free. 'Cause even if he murdered her, when they said his rights, they have to say it all the way through, even if he has the money for an attorney. Unable to do so, the police just let him walk free (Aka, even IF he did, then he;s still free, 'cause of their mistake, and they can't arrest him again for it, 'cause that'd be double jepordy, and he can walk away AGAIN because of his consitutional rights :))

Update soon, I think this is wonderful, and I want to know who did kill Anzu (Not that I care or anything)

Update the damn story pllllleeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeee. Thanks

yea, Seto has to go to court or to jail!!! I'm not mean to him, but disappointed. Anywayz, when's the next chapter? Its been 2 fucking long since you've wrote the last chapter!!!

awe those poor boys! ^_^ i like the fic! ~Leaf~

daisy: an update! yey!
nuva: should we be sad that tea died?
daisy: well i'm not.
nuva: neither am i. good riddance! she could have placed seto and jou's relationship in jeporday! and i didn't like her very much anyways.
daisy: well, hope things get better and they find out who framed seto! they are gonna get it if i find out who they are! *holds up sythe*
nuva: eep! 0_0 scary hikari!
daisy: ^-^ get the next chapter up soon!

daisy: omg! poor jou-kun!
nuva: you realize how many people are gonna say that?
daisy: ... omg?
nuva: T_T no! "poor jou-kun" or "poor joey"!
daisy: well of course! he just had a tramatic experience! BAD SETO, VERY BAD SETO!
seto: 0_0
nuva: and you messed up a perfectly good lemon seto-kun! *starts choking him*
seto: g-get... o-off... of... m-me!
daisy: yami no!
nuva: *stops* doshiite?! (why?!)
daisy: cause if you kill seto, then we will have no more story, then you won't get your lemon.
nuva: 0_o;; hm, got a point there. *lets go of seto* hmpf! you're lucky i'm such a yaoi, hentai loving yami.
seto: yes, _very_ lucky. *sighs*
daisy: oh! mystery person is gonna get seto!
seto great. -_-
nuva: dun worry seto-kun. you won't die, ... at least i think you won't
daisy: HE CAN'T! JOU NEEDS HIM! well, hope you update this really soon to find out who the mystery pissed off person is! ^-^

I'd tell you what I thought through our IM chats but *sticks tongue out* you're not on right now.... then again... it's what, 3:07 in the morning where you are so I don't blame ya. ANYWAYS, *whine* I wanna know who the shadow is!!! Is it Yami? Or maybe Tristan? No, wait, You don't like him. Okay, is it Tea? Wait, you probably hate her too, since she dies in this story.... okay then, Malik? Hey! It's possible, you *KNOW* we were thinking it after last Saturday's eppie.... GAH! IT'S DRIVING ME CRAZY!!! I NEED TO KNOW!!!

Grr.
Kitsune Hashiba

I like it and keep going