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for The Better Father

by kerrysaulters

person OwaranaimonoAite
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I feel honored that you decided to use my suggestion. ^^() So sorry I didn't review chapter 4. I hadn't been online, so I hadn't known. This is going to be excellent! The strange cravings... the uncontroable urges to use the bathroom, the sneezing and him peeing in his pants... (does happen. Not funny in reality, but funny for Seto) It's going to be odd if Liz and Mokuba see the birth.... O_o Oh well. Can't wait. *skips off to cuc cucumbers dipped in butterscotch pudding* Yum! =^_^=
person crazieanimefan1
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Joey did do Seto, but however, I will reveal how this happened. Just stay tuned. Thanks everyone for you reviews! ^_^
person Sisco
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!! Now I remember. Short term memory loss! =P Lol.

Great chapter!! =D I can't wait for Kaiba to have that baby. I hope it's a boy! Hehe. I'm just a psycho who wishes she had a baby boy! T_T Lol.

Sano: Don't mind her. She doesn't know what's she's talking about.

PFFFT!!! >=P Like Hell I don't!!

Sano: >_>

Okay, maybe I don't. -_-;
person zhou
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here's my two cents. Twins and boys. Good story so far and I can't wait to see what happens. Kaiba with mood swings...Scary!!! I'll try to add more to my review next time.
person PirateDucky (too lazy to sign in)
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O Wow... That's all I can really say. Just... Wow. I love the plot twist. Keep writing!
person OwaranaimonoAite
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O What's going to happen?!?! Are Seto and Jou going to have a kid too? Or adopt if it's not MPREG?! I want to know! Update soon!!!! Please?!?!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry, kk. The next chaptern't n't be as "depressing" as you think. I can grant you that one.
person Saelbu
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved this chapter, update soon. ^_^
person Saelbu
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This sound really good, update soon. ^_^
person kk
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
there is only 2 chapters where are the rest huh tell me tell me NOW i can't believe there is not another chapter thats extremely depressing