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for The Better Father

by kerrysaulters

person dancingpixies
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic. It is so cool ^_^
person Nomalaz
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Several things I must say:

1-This fic is awesome!
2-First mpreg fic I've seen with Seto pregnant.
3-Wish I had found this sooner so I could give my strange craving suggestion (pickles and chocolate milk).
4-Love how you ended it.
5-Please make a sequel! It would be hilarious (and frightening) to see Yami, Bakura, and Malik give birth at the same time!
person Sushi
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guh, this story is so good. I'm so glad you updated. It's a highlight of my day. =D I can't wait until the next part. *looks forward to it*
person mofaf
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the ending....it was great...can't wait for the sequel. Oh boy, all three of them are sick...that is gonna be something else. Wonder if the world is ready for a baby Yami, or a baby Malik or heaven forbid a baby Bakura?

Oreos w/ Ketchup, raw mussles with whipped cream, Tuna ice cream w/ whipped cream and fish crackers....all are tied for grossest with me....of course anything with ketchup on it is considered gross to me....
person OwaranaimonoAite
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!! I can't wait for the sequal!!!!!!! Hehehe. Loved it! I can't vote for myself huh? XD Great chapter... Inventive torture for Yami!!!!! *skips off to think, while her fics cower in fear fo what she'll do to them* I've ben inspired to write now thanks to reading the final chapter of this one. Can't wait for the sequal!!! Soon please!!!!!!!
person kaijou
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story!! Seto pregnant just sounds waaay too cute. i don't know if i'm too late but lunch today gave me an excellent idea.
Allow me to explain. My "friends" (sometimes i wonder) have an annual "let's see what Kai can get without gagging" contest during lunch.
today's special, strawberry salad. Now on this trolly thing in the middle of the cafateria they have stuff like ketchup, mayonnase, ranch dressing and mustard.
We took a dollop of all of them. In my salad we have a few strawberries (5 or 6 i think) so one of my bestest friends goes.
"Hey Kai! dip a strawberry in everything and eat it!" ohhh goodie.... the strawberry ketchup wasn't too bad but i must've made a really funny face when i ate the strawberry mixed with mayonnase.
>.< gods... sooo gross
person maggiemay
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story. I stayed up most of the night reading and re-reading. Hysterically funny! Are you still taking suggestions for the sequel? If so I have one...instead of JUST YAMI pregnant...make it YAMI AND YUGI...not only will Yami have to deal with his changes, but his Hikari's too...but, make Yami TWINS...also...just for evil Have TEA stay to "Help Out"... N e way....UPDATE SOON please (big chibi puppy dog eyes).

Maggie
person Nite Nite
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I dont know if I mentioned who I wanted to faint...YAMI MARIK!!!!!!!!!!!
person 26-no
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^-^ oo, um, u know, sry i don't have anything for names as soon as i think of idea's ill tell ya hehe. BUT it would be really nice if you could update this fic. come to think of it lee, is a good middle name plus, it works for both m/f!
person Sushi
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My suggestion on the fainting is either Malik or Yami. I'd say Yami because if the others have already started their dark magic on him, it could be too much for him, and an interesting way to find out the revenge, but then again, it could be too soon for that. Then it could be because he's always so tough.

Gross food. I'd say sardines and peanut butter.

This chapter was great. I can't wait for Seto to have the babies and to see how they react to newborns. =D