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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NANI!!!!!!! YAMI!!!!!!!! that's so bad!!!!!!! but i love the lemon!!!! i don't like song-fics but i just read the lines between it so i can bear it... ^__^()
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excelent. I think you should do a follow up on the "ask Yami" line.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um... I haven't started reading it yet, but why make Malik hikari's name Marik? And vice versa with Malik yami? It does seem kinda confusing seeing that most of the Malik fangirls are used to Malik hikari being called Malik and Malik yami being called Marik... But I am going to read it right now and then review it!
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The song really does go with the fic. Good choice in music! It was such a yummy PWP with Malik and Marik! There was a minor error though. Marik was tied up to the headboard in the beginning but, later on, it seems as thought he wasn't when he had dug his fingernails into Malik's back. Other than that, delicious lemon! You should definitely keep writing!