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by MarikIshtar77

person Anon
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
have some pride yami..and turn and leave!!!
person Nightmare
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH!!!! hay a bar brawl, nice touch, please don't let Ryou die, or Yami send Bakura to the shadow Realm, did they screw each other?? because that might not have been the best idea but I don't care (as long as Yami dosen't hurt 'Kura) nice chappie title please update soon, hope to see an update soon

Luv Nightmare
person Nightmare
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh curse you evil! (thats alot coming from me) what is happening with Ryou? and why the fuck is Bakura being such an ass? please update soon

Love Nightmare
person Velvetina
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay Seto! Yay chappie! Yay you!...i'm all and so i'm going to bed eagarly awaiting another chappie
person Terri
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!..Finally an update!!..^___^..I have been checking for days..what can I say..one of my top 3 fav fics!!..What is wrong with Ryou??!!..I mean what could cause him so much pain??!!..hmm..and Marik with fireworks and a mystery item coming in the mail..somehow I doubt Domino will saf safe place to be soon!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I adore the pairings you have in this though!! Yami/Marik is cute in that slightly demented way..^_~..
person Elle-FaTe2x1
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!! I can't wai tto see what havoc Bakura and Marik are going to reap (we know they will) and what's going to happen!!
hmm.... is Ryou pregnant??? nah..
person Deb
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe excellent chapter huni!!
Cheesy poofs hahaha thats hilarious!
Poor Ryou...you're so mean Care hehe its just for revenge isnt it? *giggle*
LOL the way you descibed Yami...you know hes gonna hate for for that...oh dear here comes more disconnecting crap
I cant wait for more bakura and marik naughtiness...and of course seto with all his insults *grins*
Please update again soonies!!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person Wildcard
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, more YamixMarik? *pouts* But I wanted MarikxBakura... Anyway, loved the insults shot back and forth with Seto in the scene, and you peaked my curiousity about what it was that Marik ordered now. XD
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...I think I missed a chapter... cuz I hadn't read 14 and I'm about to read 15, but anyway:

OMG NICE BURN YUGI! I think he's spending too much time with Bakura, but that's not necessarily a bad thing ;) And and and!! Marik + Bakura + motorcycle = uber hotness. tee hee hee.

k, I'm gonna go re-read the lemon and then I'm gonna hop over to 15... *grin*
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods, Bakura is hilarious. And Kaiba is mean. And Marik is a joker. And I LOVE THEM ALL!! Buton Bon Bakura, rollerskating is fun... I'm going tomorrow :) I was laughing like crazy when Kura n Kaiba were exchanging insults... hehehe, I agree, Bakura *is* easy ;) More soon, yes? Please? Thanks!