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You know..I have read that chapter a couple times..and it just keeps getting funier!!..^_^..Anyways..can't wait for the next update!! This my all time fav fan fic it is so great!

Heya, I really enjoy your story -- and honestly, I didn't think I would! I've been following it since the beginning though, and I have to say I'm intrigued by your pairings. I thought I'd tell you that your last few chapters have been posted screwy, tho -- Ch. 16 "I Hate Every..." was cut off after six paragraphs (right at the beginning) and Ch. 17 "Afraid" was cut off right after Ryou asked Bakura to make the pain stop. Ch. 18 "Red Light, Green Light" seems to be fully there with author's notes at the end, but I'd like to see the rest of the other two chapters. Also, I know you have a beta already, but honestly I'd like to help supplement that person's editing -- I'm a working editor and could help your story. Email me if you're interested -- no offense intended to your current beta, but two sets of eyes are better than one. And I really do like your story, and just want to help. Keep updating, please; you seem to be the only author I'm currently reading that can update.

~,~'~LadyGrey~,'~{@

The last three chapters were decadently enjoyable! Love the music, love the mahem! Keep it going for all it's worth!

I've JUST read your new chpt.(18)and I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! BAKURA'S JUST THE GREATEST!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is he going to be KEEPING the Mil. Rod!?! What about more Marik, you've got to have more Marik!!!!
(poor,poor Malik having to read that odd book to Ryou*POOR Ryou!*)
Yami's finally with Yugi? Or is it just an act? *hope not*
PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE, ITS GETTING HARDER TO WAIT ALREADY, I JUST 'LOVE' YOUR STORYS!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!

Ja ne
YOURBigFan
Miss War-chan ^_^

I've JUST read your new chpt.(18)and I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! BAKURA'S JUST THE GREATEST!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is he going to be KEEPING the Mil. Rod!?! What about more Marik, you've got to have more Marik!!!!
(poor,poor Malik having to read that odd book to Ryou*POOR Ryou!*)
Yami's finally with Yugi? Or is it just an act? *hope not*
PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE, ITS GETTING HARDER TO WAIT ALREADY, I JUST 'LOVE' YOUR STORYS!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!

Ja ne
YOURBigFan
Miss War-chan ^_^

Cool chapie, I think we all would have done what Bakura did if we had the chance. So hows confessing true love, It had better not be Bakura hes just a better person when hes single (if sending people to the shadow realm makes you better, which it dose in my books) so yeah update see ya

Nightmare

YES!! New chappie! I never had time to review before since I read this before I left for school in the morn' and then I would be stuck with college essays >_< But this story is awesome and makes me live through another boring day at school ^_^ Haaaa, Bakura's great... ^_^ <3

Keep 'em coming!!!

~ Liz

*gasp* oh no, baku has the ring again..hehe...now this story is getting evil! w00t!
Weevil & Rex are stupid, annoying, ugly, & my least favorite characters...>_>
hehe...i love the whole radio gig that baku did to yami...hehe it was great!
who will confess their love?...c'mon, stop the anticipate...update, so we can know !
*~peace~*

Why are you not updatign I love this story please please update I kinda only come to adult fanfiction when tehre are good storys and your story is good!!!!!!!

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*PLEASE!!!!!*

Ja ne
YOURBigFan
Miss War-chan ^_^