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LOVED THE RADIO PART!!!!!!! I almost couldn't breath! I was laughing SOOOooo much!!!!!!!!!! Finally a Marik/Bakura lemon!
I've been waiting forever for that! I hope that the pairings are somewhere as they are now (B/YM, YY/Y, M/R....is Seto going to
come in with Jou sometime in the future? If not its ok.) When's the sk8ing going to come? Can't wait fo you to get 10 new
reviews (MORE STORY that way! ^__^) I look at this stroy EVERY SINGALE DAY to see if you updated!!! Then when I see that
you did I sceam *then get told (very loudly I might add) to shut the fuck up! (nice huh? show how much my mom loves me
.....OH, WELL, I don't like her ether (Oops! I'm rabbling, sorry O.o;)* Well anyway, as always.....Ahem....PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!


Ja ne
YourBigFan
Miss War-chan ^_^!

none of the yamis are faithful to each other...eh?? can't wait to see how it ends

Great Story. I love it, post soon.

This is such a good story XD I really love the way you write the characters and how they interact with each other, it's a lot better than in the actual series but it isn't so far from the original that it seems fake. (I hope that made sense) I can actually picture half of this stuff happening too!

Can't wait for the next chapter to be added,
-Ema

God, I've loved this story so far, and each chapter gets better and better. Keep up the good work!! XD And sex while rollerskating.. -Taps chin.- sounds fun >D

Oh good chapie. Poor Yami (not that we really care) having Yugi fuck his most hated enemy in their lounge. And Bakura learned a lesson pavment and ancient tomb thief don't mix, see ya!

*CLUNK*
.........................wow..........................
me like....hehehe
AND you dedicated it to me! How sweet! Thankies!
Hehe i had EMN playing in the background whilst reading hehehe ^_^ It goes well *giggle*
Bakura/yugi stuff is hottt hehehe
Cant wait to see next lemon and who its between.........although i think i have an idea ^_~
Much Luv
Debs xxx

wow. This must be your most sappiest chappie yet, lot's of emotion and i can't believed Yami cried...it's kinda sad...
Poor baku got his leg hurt, but atleast he gets laid..again..
I know who'll be in the next Lemon! Yami/Marik! right right right?! I'm sooooo smart! ^_^ heh
Keep up your lovely work! ^.^
*~peace*~

That would be too interesting! Take some good balance though..hmmm..or..*grins*..nevermind..^_^;;.. Wow..Yami finally giving it up?!! Go Yami! And more Bakura/Yugi action *cheers*..Yugi so likes Kura..they still get my vote! Okay well I really really hope the next chapter is up tomorrow! (I'm not above begging you know! ^_~)

“Ryou? Are you awake?”

Ryou coughed as he slowly opened his eyes. At first everything was foggy, but slowly his eyes came into focus after blinking a few times.

“Bakura?” he ask in a hoarse voice. “What are you doing here?”

Bakura reached over and took Ryou’s hand into his.

“You’re so cold, hikari. Need your yami to warm you up?”

Ryou smiled as brightly as he could. He still felt groggy from his medicine.

“I’d like that.”

Bakura kicked off his boots and crawled into bed next to Ryou, carefully positioning himself so that he didn’t hurt his hikari.

He rested his cheek on the pillow facing Ryou and smiled, running his fingers lightly over Ryou’s colorless cheek.

“I’m so glad you’re alright, I was scared I was going to lose you.”

Ryou bit his lip.

“You mean you actually care about me?” he asked Bakura.

Bakura gently pressed his lips against Ryou’s forehead. “I care more than you realize.”

Ryou smiled as he gazed into Bakura’s eyes. “For real?”

Bakura nodded his head slowly. “Yes, Ryou, for real..........”

Aww, does Bakura really care though, if he does Ryou can have his lttle fantasy see ya