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by MarikIshtar77

person Anakh
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your stories for awhile now (Or, more appropriatly, stalking your stories obsessively as to bookmark it under ever AOL account name I have..), and I only just NOW found the review button. x3 I've been meaning to review these buggers for awhile now.

I ADORE this story. Deffinetly feel sorry for 'Kura-Kun, tho.. *Giggle.* I believe Marik is right by saying he needs to get laid. *Snerk.*

..and, as other's have said, do we sense mild Bakura/Yuugi in the wings? Gasp. *Grin.* But.. if no one minds me repeating a question.. just what IS up with that bowling ball..? That darn thing.. =3

Anyway, keep up the great work, and I look forward to your next chapter! =D=D!
person dragonkitty
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story. Bakura is a riot. I almost feel bad for him, having to deal with Marik and Yami all touchy feely. And then Ryou got somebody. -_- It must suck. Well there is always Yugi. I just think that is cute! ^^
person Deb
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fricking great story huni!!!!!!
Love bakura (you) in this hehehe!
Marik is so funny! lol!
The waterpark sounds so hilarious, i cant wait to read that!!!
Please update again soonies!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person Camille
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cute story! Is little Ryo falling for Bakura, or worried? Will we see Bakura kicking Marik's ass? Will Yuugi get involved with Bakura? (Can't see this). Anyway, keep going and I'll be looking for this story because this place has no alerts!!!!
person angelstarfire_hikarist
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* I feel sorry for Bakura... he'll have temptation and revulshion all in one house... all night. ^^;;; Wow... *more chuckling* I can't wait to see what he does... and I've never really pictured Bakura with Yuugi, so I'm very anxious to see how this turns out. ^^
person Nightmare
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!! Cool!! go 'Kura and Yami's ass and pudding?? *shudder* Great chapies and whats up with the bowling ball??

Luv Nightmare
person Arias5
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! This story is another of your best! And you also posted the second chappie! Double yay! ^.^
ooo...do i see a bakura/yugi pairing? never read a fanfic of those two....cliffies are evil....but updates are Good!
^_^
~*peace out~*
person Rebecca
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"He discretely started carving a pentagram into his metal fold up chair."

-snickers- Hehe! >xD
person Deb
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS!!!!!!!
Well you do know that already XP hehe....no harm in saying it again tho ^__^
Bakura is so funny, aww how can you not love him...*makes cutsey noiseCantCant wait for the Waterpark bit....im getting fidgety coz i want to read it so bad hehehe
Pleeeease update again soonies huni!
Much Luv and Huggles!
Debs xxx
person Rurouni_agra
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I should have guessed you were writing this (I didn't look at the author until I finished reading the second chapter) it's just too funny to be anybody else’s. Dammit, now I'm waiting on TWO of your fics. Evil EVIL woman, what give you the right to lock me into a story like you do. Grrr. Hmp, well, at any rate I'll be waiting, hating you every minute for making me wait but loving you for every second of anticipation once you write again.

Yami with values. *snort* THAT'S not something you see everyday. And here I ght ght you didn't like Yami-kins. The Yami/Marik-ness surprised me. Of course you still make him out to be a moron (matching PUZZELS! lol, I was cracking up) but he's a sexy moron, (especially when tied to the bed, ne?)

Marik flirting with Bakura is SO funny. You write it as only you can, please put tons of it in this fic (for me? PLEASE *tearing chibi eyes*)

Am I sensing some Bakura/Yugi hiding in the wings? Even if its only comfort sex? Hmm...must hypothesize and daydream about that...

You know I love you lots! Awaiting your next chapters with baited breath and prepared to worship at your feet to get it~ Rurouni_agra