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by MarikIshtar77

person Deb
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord!!! Yami the slut!!!! Haha!
Poor Ryou lmao
Marik: *holds kura away from yams* Bakura stop!!
Yami: *frightened* Its not my fault!! Care made me do it!!!!
Bakura: *seethes* Stupid bitch pharaoh! *chases yams off down the street*
Hehe cant wait to see what happens next huni! LMAO Kura and Marik jacking that car is so hilarious!!! PLEEEEASE update sooooonies!!!
Much Luv and Many huggles
Debs xxxx
person Arias5
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated...oo...i love it how you write...i get too into it ...! and that's good!
I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^_^
~*peace*~
person lightlost
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thiss waqs great . But i wish you woldn''t takeee so long to uuup date
person JavaGreen
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I do believe Yami will be getting into trouble.
person Deb
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee excellent chapter!!!!!!!
LOL marik said kuras name! Hahahah! thats so funny!!! Was this during sex....or just in general? hehe!
Hehe yay!! you put in defective sperm! such a great thing for bakura to say! ^_^
Cant wait to find out what the bowling ball means! hehe! its kinda bugging me now lol
LOL christmas at the bakura residence would be so hilarious! i swear to god! what i wouldnt give for that...or maybe just a little rain, eh? Heh ^_~
Update soonies hun!!!
Much Luv and Hugs!
Debs xxxx
person Terri
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is great!!!..^_^..Please keep going and I hope you can update faster!!..I adore the Yugi/Bakura pairing!!..too cute!..but still can't wait until Yami finds out..oh!..and that whole fight..too damn funny!!!..saying Bakuras name!..I almost lost it laughing!!
person Kat
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bitchin! Absofrickenlutely bitchin'! Loved this chapter. Especially the descriptions of Christmas! Damn, I want him to decorate here for stmastmas! Had to be my favorite part. He'd be a blast to be around. Ooooo that question about the reverse dimension card and going to the bathroom *falls over laughing*. I'm so glad that I'm not the only one that thinks that way!!

Congrats on being back to, ahem, normal!

Kat
person DemonLover
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! More soon!
person Horizont
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

Wow, your story is so fun to read! ^_^x I'm very much looking forward to the 5th part, so please update soon!

Thx!
~Horizont
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me again! K, so the last half of my review got cut off, but there was more stuff about getting better, etc. And about me wanting more Hellraiser Bakura...
*kicks AFF*
love, hugs, yamis,
Tanya