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for Hellraisers

by MarikIshtar77

person Terri
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!..another update!!!..^_^..thanks!..that made my saturday!...ohhh..Ryou and Malik..*drools*...hmm..so now Yami has feelings for Yugi??!!..is he pregnant or something?!..I swear he seems to switch moods and actions faster than anything!..and I still vote the Yugi/Bakura pairing..they even each other out nicely..^_^..okay..well can't wait for the next update..really really hoping its soon!!..
person Kat
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The yami was wearing a pair of high heel black boots that went up past his knees, a short black pleated skirt with matching blazer, and a frilly white, high necked blouse.
*gasps* Holy Fucking Shit.... Oh my....

Ohhhhhh so that's what Yami wanted. Tch, here I suspected he'd do something else entirely.

Awwwww, that's so cute. Malik loves Ryou (says she hoping they hurry up and get to the sex).

I'm still trying to get over the image of Bakura as a naughty catholic schoolgirl....

Wait, you mean there are other uses for bowling balls?? Hmm....

Love it!
Kat
person woodooist
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha, nyce fic...fuked up but in a good way...keep writing
person Arias5
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! since you updated twice ..i thought why not review twice? ^-^
I have soo many questions...but i'll wait until you update maybe it'll answer some questions...
your story has saved me from boredom..^__^
~*thankies~*
person Nightmare
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed as of late but with the review thing down and then having to have my computer fixed I've had some troubles. But oh yeah! the plot is thickening and Yami is a worthless Bastard! how could he take advatage of Ryou like that??? I truely loved Ryou's discription of Bakura. But yeah so how is the Ryou/Malik realtionship working out? aside from Ryou sleeping with Yami that is, is no one faithful??? Please do a Ryou/Bakura lemon somtime

Luv Nightmare
person War-chan
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU BEST GIVE ME MORE BEFORE I GO EVEN MORE INSANE!!!!! ^___^ LOVVVE THE STORY UPDATE SOON.....
LIKE REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ja ne
REALLYBigFan
Miss War-chan
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY!! THERE ARE TWO CHAPTERS!! Ahem, and they both totally rocked. AND MY NAME WAS IN THE FIC!! And Yami is a little bitch, isn't he? *climbs into car with Kura and Marik*

I love Yugi. And that's the end of that chapter ^_^;;

Btw, which hand did Bakura smash the car in with? Because I did something similar to a fireplace with my left. And now there are holes. And blood. And bruises. D'oh. *snuggles him*

Can't wait till Friday!! *dances*
person Kat
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Two updates this close together! You're going to spoil everyone. *laughs* Those poor defenseless cars! I swear Bakura, Marik is more trouble than his dick is worth... *blinks* Okay, that made sense in my head. Nevermind.....

Yami and Ryou? Lordy, he is a slut!!! Hmmm, Yami and ancient magic... sooo not good. Especially with him being all jealous bitch pharoh and all.

*laughs hysterically* the visual of Bakura nd Marik in the car being chased by the cops is the best! I loved that!

I love the reworked song! *cackles* It so fits.

*shrieks aallsalls over laughing* bowling ball.... *laughs harder* best use ever!

GAAAAAH It's gonna suck to wait until Friday!!

Love it!
Kat
person Terri
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*LOL*...How are Bakura and Marik going to get away from all the cops??!!!..waiting until friday?!!!..NO!!!..I don't know if I will last!!!..ahat hat did Yami do to Ryou??!!!..I'm dying of curiosity here!!!..^_^..okay well obviously another great chapter!!..keep them coming!!..and I still put my vote in for Bakura/Yugi!..^_~
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor yami.. i hope there's a good ending for him... so much ppl using ppl

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