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by MarikIshtar77

person Nightmare
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay this has been bugging me for a long time, are Ryou and Bakura going to ever go back to the youth group mettings? so yeah are they going back or is Bakura going to put yami in a coma and not be allowed back?
person Terri
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!..Yugi and Baku hooking up!..^__^..*LOL*..and what a way for Yami to find out!..*LMAO*..serves him right!!!..I can't wait for the next chapter this is getting soooo good!
person Deb
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg! LOVED this chapter!!!!!!!!
Mariks dream was hotttt!!! Very nice ^___~
Lol Yamis a tad annoyed now i see hehe i wonder what he'll do....dum dum dum!
YAY a motley song! (Btw you've got me soooo damned hooked! Hehe thanks huni!)
Haha the jobs are coming up! LOL dragon balls! *pisses self*
Please update again soonies!!!
Much Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person dragonkitty
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD the last line that Marik said made this chapter hehe
person Nightmare
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay nice chappie. What did Bakura mean with "Besides, Ryou wouldn’t have been walking this morning if I fucked him. He’d be lucky to be moving if I had my way with him" is that a Ryou/Bakura lemon coming? please Yami don't kill, maim, hurt Bakura in anyway

See you at the next update Nightmare
person Ralphiere
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That, I have to say, was enjoyable. Sick and twisted and very enjoyable. Keep it up.
person Arias5
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha! Baku in a bunni suite! xP
i thought to review twice since you gave two lovely updates!
hehehe...Marik as naughty as ever...but that's wat i like about him! ^_^
*~*~peace*~*~
person Kat
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, shit. I think I hit brain dead and bloody nose at the same time!!! I haven't heard the tv, missed the im conversation, everything. Sonofabitch, girl! We coulda had an earthquake and I'd have totally missed it reg abg about Marik and Yami having phone sex.

Oh yeah.. made up for everything! Marik and Bakura next? Sweet hot damn!

Kat
person Hannah
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, please update soon! pleeeease. It appeals to my dirty mind and I have been hoping! waiting! for the
Bakura and Marik lemon. I love you!!! I look forward to the neeext chapter. *laughs crazily and dances away*
Until next time...adieu. Happy writing.
person Nightmare
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH stuipd Marik We were so close to a Ryou/Bakura lemon Damn It!!! Oh well nice chapie see you at the next update
P.S Bakura a playboy bunnie?? woa
Luv Nightmare

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