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for Hellraisers

by MarikIshtar77

person Ralphiere
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a sadistic f'k....And I love you!

Keep 'em coming.
person Horizont
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!

I love the way you write about Bakura - he's so in character! ^_^x I mean the scene where Ryou asks him for help and he just walks away as if he wouldn't give a shit (cuz I don't think he's all that lovey dovey, that's just not him!) but he lso does him a favor. I think he does care for his hikari but it wouldn't be Bakura if he showed it.

You're doing a great job, keep it on! ^_^x

~Horizont
person Arias5
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! I finally got to read your fic ...sheesh AFF.net was being such a butt monkey....stupid errors! anywho....I know there will be a lemon in the next chappie! hehehe....bring out the cookies! ....mans, i hope Ryou gets better...poor dude...;_;
*~peace*~
person Arias5hellyano@yahoo.com
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that Lemon was like....WOAH! ...they were like Bunnies! (^._.^)?
ahem....anywho...did i see that Kaiba will be in the next chappie?...^___^ UPDATE!!!! plz!
*~peace out*~
kukuku
person Elle-FaTe2x1
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooh!!!! insults!! *giggle* What's going to happen I wonder? Is Ryou going to get better? I can't waoit to see what havoc Bakura and Marik reak!!
person Deb
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe!! This is so much fun!!!
Oh the greatness of this story *grins*
I cant wait for when Kaiba comes into the picture!! Flying insults wooo!!! Haha!
The lemon works great huni! See i knew it would ^_~ *knows all* hehe i wish
I wonder who the next lemon will be between *giggles*
Cant wait for the next chappie!! ^_^
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person Ralphiere
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable. I love your motley group of miscreants. (I'm making the kids go hungry and wait for breakfast so I can read this!) Keep it going.
person Velvetina
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story! Awsome chappie! Poor Ryou I hope he feels better..haha Marik got something right for once Ryou is the Devil Incarnate! Update soon...oooh with Seto you wonderful person *GLOMP*
person Nightmare
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh cool chappie!!! What is wrong with Ryou?? please don't let him die!

Marik looked up from his drunken stupor. “Where are you going?” he asked Malik.

“Youth group, okay? I’ll be home by 9:30.”

Marik turned and gawked at Bakura, than looked at Ryou in total confusion. “Wait a minute- This doesn’t make sense to me. The good one is skipping church, and the devil reincarnate is willingly going?” ugi ugi nodded his head. “Yeah, that about sums it up.”

Marik took a swig of his booze and chuckled. “I just have to see this, I’m coming with.”

Nice to see some humour even when Ryous dying of AIDS

See next time Nightmare
person Terri
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!..another update!..I was hoping all day for one..and some Yugi/Bakura action!!..oh yeah!..okay..well can't wait for the next post!!..*LMAO*..Bakura back in youth group..damn!..and they couldn't even drag/blackmail or force me into a second one!! This should be beautiful!!!

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