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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Horizont may think, "...we smut fans usually don't care that much 'bout story...," but I think she should speak for herself.
If you intended this to be PWP, then I suppose you've succeeded, although your grammar could stand a bit of work. Overall, it's not so bad, if I'm being completely objective. However, from a more subjective and "personal preference" point of view, I'm not impressed. I'm not saying that Seto isn't uke material, just that I don't approve of your choices. I particularly disagree with the idea that Seto would *ever* allow himself to be uke to Yami, no matter what the circumstances.
It simply isn't my cup of tea.
If you intended this to be PWP, then I suppose you've succeeded, although your grammar could stand a bit of work. Overall, it's not so bad, if I'm being completely objective. However, from a more subjective and "personal preference" point of view, I'm not impressed. I'm not saying that Seto isn't uke material, just that I don't approve of your choices. I particularly disagree with the idea that Seto would *ever* allow himself to be uke to Yami, no matter what the circumstances.
It simply isn't my cup of tea.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Joey as the dominate. Uke!Seto is so hot! The story is so addicting. And awesome thing you did getting Yami in on the action.
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg! that was HOTTTTT!!!!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am sad this story is 2 years old and most likly won't be updated.... Come baaaaaaaaaaaaack
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved it !
PLease...Please update soon!
PLease...Please update soon!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another chapter another chapter yayyyy^.-
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really really good please update soon.jou taking power for once alright!
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... You so need to continue.... That is a new twist to JouKai fics.....
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm reviewing. You know, I find the utter lack of plot and in-characterness distressing... yet at the same time, I don't read fics like this a lot, and so it's rather refreshing... everyone just have random uke-seto sex! XD Okay, next chapter, plase?