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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome stuff! Yay for lemons! lol. I shall be looking for more of your works now.... -toddles off.-
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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that wa sdifferent. I have never read a lemon where Yugi was the Seme and Yami was the Uke. I am pleasently surprised at how wonderful that was. Keep up the great work!
One Crazy Anime Obbsessed Freak,
AnimeGal4
One Crazy Anime Obbsessed Freak,
AnimeGal4
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha that was really funny
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm.. I liked your story, but I have to agree with the other reviewer about using cologne. Consider this constructive criticism. Cologne has alcohol in it.. like rubbing alcohol. It evaporates quickly and is not slick at all. Would you enjoy someone fingering you with rubbing alcohol on their fingers? I doubt it. It would burn like hell and the person would still be too dry to fuck. I know that people try to think of something other than lube to use because they want to be different, but use some common sense about things like this. Things like cologne, hair gel, and shampoo are horrible lubricants.. they'll either dry up as soon as you touch it or get sticky and burn. I've even read stories where someone had their characters using honey or syrup or jam.. that doesn't work. If you put any of that in a female, it'll probably dry up and get sticky (not slippery) and give her a hell of a yeast infection from the sugar (and that's not a sexy thought at all). I doubt it works any better for males.
I'm not dissing your story or bitching at you. I just thought for future reference that it might be a good thing to know. I hope you continue to write and that you continually become a better writer. Experience is the best teacher, so mistakes can be good as long as you learn from them. Good luck in future writing ventures.
I'm not dissing your story or bitching at you. I just thought for future reference that it might be a good thing to know. I hope you continue to write and that you continually become a better writer. Experience is the best teacher, so mistakes can be good as long as you learn from them. Good luck in future writing ventures.
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cologne? that's like using water.. which is not a great lubricant. spit would have worked better than that.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nix-Awww! Cuuute!^_^
Dth-U r such a Perv.
Nix-I know! But it's still CUUUTE!!
Dth-Whatever. I liked how you gave Yugi a little bit of a manipulative side, as most other people make him into a bit of a baby.
Nix-Yeah, we think you're on the right track there. Ryou and Bakura are our fav. couple, but we like Yugi/Yami too, and we get all our Japanese off other people, so you're not alone!
Dth-She's Nix
Nix-And he's Dth
And we think your fic. ROCKS!
Dth-U r such a Perv.
Nix-I know! But it's still CUUUTE!!
Dth-Whatever. I liked how you gave Yugi a little bit of a manipulative side, as most other people make him into a bit of a baby.
Nix-Yeah, we think you're on the right track there. Ryou and Bakura are our fav. couple, but we like Yugi/Yami too, and we get all our Japanese off other people, so you're not alone!
Dth-She's Nix
Nix-And he's Dth
And we think your fic. ROCKS!