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person Horizont
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!

Wow, that's so great to read, really! I'm usually a little sceptiv about RPGs (I'm doing some myself and I think it's difficult to put them into a proper story), but this one is so fun! I love reading it so please please update soon! ^_^x Bakura is a bit nice but since he's pretty dominant it still works. Yami on the other hand is wonderfully submissive, but he's been a pharaoh after all! He should have one hell of self confidence! But it's okay, I kinda like him that way... ^^;; Seto is cool, too, but doesn't Jou mind that his boyfriend is after some other man, exspecially since they have not much private time...? I mean it's interesting to see Seto so obsessed, but... what about Jou...? ^^x

Well, ganbatte ne! ^^x I'm looking forward to the next part!

Horizont
person Silvershadowfire
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Imagine my surprise - I'm cruising the site and find one of my fav YuGiOh authors!
Anyway, this story is definately up to your usual standards. I liked it alot. The whole bit in the mall, the concept of Yugi and Atemu both being submissive...very good ideas. Interesting twist with Kaiba, though. I think that Atemu is going to have to get his head on straight - maybe talk to his ai An Anyway, thanks for the story, and I'll check in again!
person DragonSpire
schedule August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh baby, Skyla you made this awesome! ^X3
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