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Hi!

Okay, we've all been waiting for this! ^_^x Good lemon, brilliant really (you metion that neck area thingy a bit often though). I'm looking forward to read the next part (btw, interesting title... *g* *star wars fan*

Bye!
Horizont

WOOHOO! GO 'KURA!

Great lemon, very well wen. en. Now, if the two of them will onlt tht their heads out of their . . . *cough* . . . you get the idea. Can't wait for the next chapter . . . and Yami is never going to live down that scream. Bet the entire party heard that one . . .

DracOnyx

WOW That's totally cool! Personnaly, I think that Bakura has an obsession on Atemu, and that those two make quite a passionnate and nice couple (I really like Seto and Atemu though... but whatever :P) I really like the way you describe them... *blush* it couldn't be any other way! *blush harder* And who could resist that nice ass. *grin* Certainly not me! ^_-

Wow! Shall i say......HOT!!!!
That was amazing!
Love this pairing.....*faints*
My god this chapter was excellent!
Please update again soon huni!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx

Ooohh.. dear. This is very, very funny. At first I didn't understand that you were making Yami (sorry, I can't call him Atemu yet, it's too wierd) the submissive one... and I admit I've been a little leary of reading new material because so much of it out here is just poorly written, but not this -- You have a very nice writing style, understand grammer, punctuation, all stuff that gets you a definate second look in my book. I'm looking forward to the update -- I'm a little new to YGO ff but this is working its way up my list of really good reads. (If I could figure out the Ra-damned "add to recommended reading" thing, I'd add this story too -- sorry.) Anyway, ja ne, please update soon! ~~,~LadyGrey~'~{@

^___^ Spiffy fic! You've got to stop teasing us though. *pouts* Keep going!

Hey there!

I'm really glad aff.net has stopped acting up for once so I was able to read the third part and I sooo can't wait to read on so.... yeah well, please continue soon! ^_^x

THX!
Horizont

That was priceless . . . ! I still love it, and can't wait to see more. Hopefully AFF.Net will continue to run smoothly so we can see some more of this story. I can't help but laugh hysterically through most of it!
Great job, and keep it up!

DracOnyx

So...wait are Atemu and Yugi together, or something because Atemu speaks of betraying him? I like the story and plot so far. I would love to read the rest of it.

Okay . . . I'm officially DYING to read the rest of this. Please do continue, and soon.