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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just decided to read this, and let me say this, it's excellent!
:)GRaLnak
:)GRaLnak
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August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Poor Kura!
DD: Ra damned Anubis!: Th: The elders are gonna let Marik's wife be killed?!
DD: Gods!
YD: Great chappie, baby!
DD: Ra damned Anubis!: Th: The elders are gonna let Marik's wife be killed?!
DD: Gods!
YD: Great chappie, baby!
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Poor Ryou.
LD: Eh, it isn't that bad. Bakura may look evil in this story, but we know it all works out.
Karen: *glares at LD * That is not the point. He should not have to go through any torture. It is just plain wrong.
LD: Hunh, you are so sentimental. ^________^ Bakura and Marik! Yay!
LD: Eh, it isn't that bad. Bakura may look evil in this story, but we know it all works out.
Karen: *glares at LD * That is not the point. He should not have to go through any torture. It is just plain wrong.
LD: Hunh, you are so sentimental. ^________^ Bakura and Marik! Yay!
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really great. We're all profoundly touched. Keep it up!
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Damn you girl! *hands tissue to her bawling hikari*
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April 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Um...how about Bakua beating Ryou again in the morning for a few hours, but it isn't Bakura who was beating him up. Someone is controlling him to try and kill Ryou but Bakura doesn't know that until later on. Ryou runs over to Yami's house and explains then Yami tries to beat up Bakura because of that. Bakura testifies but Yami doesn't believe him so he gets sent to the Shadow Realm or whatever.....
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March 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ideas...err...maybe one character or another from Bakura's past (i.e Yami, Seth whoever) can er..try to 'convince' Bakura that Ryou isn't for him and Ryou sees and mistakes it that Bakura betrayed him and when he finds out it wasn't so, he goes after whoever did it...Nice fic...
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March 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Put up the next chapter pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee? It was a really good story and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very yay! This is awsome, just like your other stories. please continue it if you are so insipired. ciao!