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person Bambi
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOREVER!!! O-M-G, that was EXCELLENT! Hehe, I love it when authors make Bakura and Marik actu som somewhat nice to eachother, not wild animals. It was DAMN hott, update soon!!! ^_~

~Bambi
person Joey Fanatic
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me from the challange!
I onl only one question about this story: why do you suddenly change from Bakura/Ryou to Bakura/Marik/OC women? Are you planning to switch back? It's really the only thing that I don't like. I could definitly see this story as storstories instead of one. But as far as the past-life plot goes, I like it! It's a very interesting story.
person Marikishtar77
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you described their adventure in Yami's grandfathers tomb! It felt like I was right there with them reading the freeky 'glyphs on the wall! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next in "their" oasis!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh boy!! Wonderful!! Aria Kanika Itemri!! You were a baaaaddd girl!! LOL~~ Wowwies!! Lemon??? Huh?? Pweeeese!

Lady Elfskye
person Bambi
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He wants him, he waants him!! *sings* Yesss!!! Grand job, update soon, can't wait can't wait! Excellent...

~Bambi
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!! LEMON!!!
DD: yup yup!!
YD: OH! I can't WAIT!!!
person Bambi
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He lovim, im, he loves him!!! ^_^ I was hoping he would have said...did...something, but it will make it all the better when you update next! Great--excellent--job, and update soon!

~Bambi
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: AAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! That was so sweet!!
YD: WOOHOO!! They're gonna get it on! Aren't they?!
DD: Don't be so crass!
YD: What?! It's Bakura and Marik!!
DD: *sighs* Okay, I give. woohoo
person Death child
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ilove this story.But im wondeingif there will be another chappie ;) wilm {ou continue the story of B&R.LOL
person Bambi
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She died??!! No way, poor Marik, hife ife sucks! :'( Except the part about living with Bakura...but excellent job! I absolutely love this! Update soon!
~Bambs