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person MarikIshtar77
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, you're right! Sex AFTER the heist is their rule! This is such a cool story. I love how you've managed to intigrate factual Egyptian history and our favorite bishies! The lemon just make it even better!
:-)
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: *kicks Yami repeatedly in the ass* Freak.
DD: *hugs Seth* S'ok, Seth. You'll get the son of a bitch back.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I finally caught up with my reading! That was awesome! Rayna is so lucky; and that spritz of lemony freshness was *SQUEEE* FANTABULOUS! Seth kicks ass!
person CascadeIllusions
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ryou is Rayna reborn. They both had a daughter with the same name.
person sstar
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this is greeaaat i don't mean to bug you but wen aarre you goiing to uuup date
person Bambi
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
REALLY, next chapter Bakura escapes!!?? YAY!! *waves flag* Yet another awesome chapter, just one request though...as soon as Marik and Bakura meet up, make them have some passionate, hot, steamy sex!! Great job, update soon.

~Bambi
person Death cild /Evil Angel
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a really really really good chp.
I feel so sorry for aria.But she has Seth.
Also you called Seth Seto a couple of times just thought i might point that out.
Can't wait for your next chapter. ^___^
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter.
And i just realized that i love Yami as abad guy... anyway please update soon.^__^
person Lady Elfskye
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Preview of the future. heh. Wonderful chappie!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Oh, holy hell!
DD: MMMMMMMM...Seth....so hot!!