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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me again! 2nd Chapter...
WONDERFUL! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I love how Yami is comforting Yuugi. It's so cute!
Writing Mechanics: A
Content: A
Word of the night--> whilst
Overall Grade: A
SUPERB! I wanna read MORE MORE MORE!!!!
^_^
WONDERFUL! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I love how Yami is comforting Yuugi. It's so cute!
Writing Mechanics: A
Content: A
Word of the night--> whilst
Overall Grade: A
SUPERB! I wanna read MORE MORE MORE!!!!
^_^
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(swoon) Once again, a spectacular chapter! I know I started late when you had this up at Fanfiction.net, but I am extremely happy that you decided to post here! Now I have a chance to review every chapter!
Poor Yuugi-kun! I really love the realistic touch you use with Yami and i's i's relation, it, it shows that the YxY pairing isn't all sugar and dumplings!
Lots of Love,
Dee
Poor Yuugi-kun! I really love the realistic touch you use with Yami and i's i's relation, it, it shows that the YxY pairing isn't all sugar and dumplings!
Lots of Love,
Dee
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent second chapter! I want to know what you're going to do to them!!!
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Omg, you had better write more soon, or Ill hunt you down and FORCE you to post the next chapter! *pulls out bazooka for emphasis* But I love t|orstory! Oh my Ra, I need to read more. Seriously, you are a very talented author. Your choice of words and basically the WHOLE DAMN STORY is awesome beyond reason. Keep up the good work! *holds up bazooka* Or ELSE. lol, Ja ne, ~Kiki-chan~
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee!! You're here aku-sama! *hugs* I'm so glad that you're reposting this on a site that isn't ruled by a sodding communist regieme... ahem... sorry. Anyway, yes, all I can say is that it still fucking roxx0rs >
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! First chapter! (sigh) It's almost like reading it for a first time. Bravo! Keep up the good work.
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
;_; You must continue; this fic grappled my attention: I must know of how Omote Yuugi shall solve his dilemma! (This is a rare occurrence for me in most fanfiction. ^_^) On a random note, I adore your use of "whilst;" it is a fabulous term. XD
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I read it awhile ago. This story REALLLY is interesting. MORE MORE MORE!!
Content: A
Mechanincs: A
OVERALL: A ;)
Content: A
Mechanincs: A
OVERALL: A ;)
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*tears in her eyes* You are back!!!!!! I thought you quittet! I'm so glad and happy. I wrote you a mail, but you never answered.
Anyway, its nice to see that you haven't given up tomodachi. I was really crushed when your account wasn't there anymore. *hugs* love ya!
Anyway, its nice to see that you haven't given up tomodachi. I was really crushed when your account wasn't there anymore. *hugs* love ya!
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, keep it up!